Topic: My Poem for My New Outlook
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Wed 06/10/09 03:53 AM
Life Tries to Pass By
Like cars on the street
Heartaches make you cry
Still cars are fast and fleet

You want to repeat
Cars just go as fast as they can
The pain makes you weak
Cars are merely driven by man

Life is always so hard
All the cars manage to blend
You look for your card
Cars just run to the end

You still have not grown
Why not just be like a car
Eventually
Life will run on its own

pkh's photo
Wed 06/10/09 04:41 AM
yes it will

tanyaann's photo
Wed 06/10/09 08:30 AM
:thumbsup:

AngelLight's photo
Wed 06/10/09 08:38 AM
Go with the flow :thumbsup:
Sounds like a plan flowerforyou

Abracadabra's photo
Wed 06/10/09 09:21 AM
BillySuvol has found himself
In a allegory of cars
Living his life automotively
Like a Mustang from the stars
Yielding to the street signs
Stopping at the lights
Underscoring his inspiration
Via the poetry he writes
Oh, such wondrous talent
Like moonshine in the sky
- his name is short on letters
- no room to say “Goodbye”

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Wed 06/10/09 10:20 AM

BillySuvol has found himself
In a allegory of cars
Living his life automotively
Like a Mustang from the stars
Yielding to the street signs
Stopping at the lights
Underscoring his inspiration
Via the poetry he writes
Oh, such wondrous talent
Like moonshine in the sky
- his name is short on letters
- no room to say “Goodbye”





i am but a star in the galaxy that which is abra cadabra

14shadesOfgray's photo
Fri 08/21/09 10:47 AM
So I was lookin for an old thread

found this one instead

dunno how much this means to anyone...however I wrote this back in June

It is now August.......


And I am currently sitting in Youngstown, OH




this was written in Knoxville, TN........hmmmmm


Tell ya what. I had NO idea I was going to be in OHIO when I wrote it:wink: