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“Surprise”
Upon the door I heard this soft tap tap tap. I slowly opened it and muttered oh crap. There before my eyes he stood all starched and neat. All I wanted to do was go hide and retreat. There I stood in all my glory, hair ruffled. My words coming out all muffled. Not to forget that I’m still in my night clothes. All I could think was boy this blows. Tell me oh please tell me. Why is it someone you would like to see? Finds you at your worst moment they could. This I have never understood. Any other time I would have looked out. The window in case there was and doubt. But the knock was so soft I figure the kids next door. Come to retrieve their ball from the backyard once more. So what could I do but say come on in. Laugh about my attire and grin. I figured there was not much I could do. Has this ever happened to you? K.L.M 6/5/2009  
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I think that's a cute write!!!!
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I will have to admit it was a site for sore eyes to see
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 ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh ((( Puddin Cup )))
Peeeeep Holessssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss
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Very nice!! And yes it has happened to me.
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i love it, storys in rhyme are my favirot kind.
grate piece of writing 
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Perhaps they find us at our "worst" moment because they are capable of seeing the "no frills" us, (the "naked")
....really like the write 
And yes, it has happened to me... 
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Thank you all for reading and glad it possible brought a smile to your face. Did this happen hummmm yeppiers sorry to say lucky me.
Ohhh and I don't have a peephole in the door shshhsshhs. 
But I must admit I did laugh it off and enjoyed the visit will he come back around hummm  have no clue guess he will call if he decides to again he did take my number lol 
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I LOVED this poem. Very cute one! 
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Adorable write and a nightmare come true. I remember having that same thing happen to me. I had no robe, I was wearing a big Elvis T shirt and panties. That's it. Awkward to say the least!
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Well honey, if he took your number let's cross our fingers...
Things may turn out afterall! 
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