Topic: new beginning
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Wed 06/03/09 04:29 PM
Edited by Imbroglio on Wed 06/03/09 05:07 PM
the beginning is where this little story i choose to begin
for it would be rather silly to start from the end

to the person this is directed this is more not a story but that of a feeling
and though you can't see me this moment i hope that your ears they are ringing

now i will admit that my rhyming is not as fair as some of my projection
i shall go ahead and risk a few frowns or tears or even a little rejection

now many of days i sat in this chair
not one of happiness not one of despair
i hand over so many a tale of shadows or of the mist
i post them among these threads please read them i insist

the shadows do this and the darkness does that
but you have convinced my inner workings see that is not where my hearts at
you have become a lighthouse for me and all of my thoughts
who would have known that this place would have brought

two individual minds together so quickly
though this is much easier to write than speak it directly
what has begun as a vague interest in some little rambled writings
has developed into two wonderful people now sitting there smiling

so now I think with no shadows to speak of
what should i write about now how light can conjure love
i won't be so rash to jump to any illusions or decisions though that is where i am leaning
but i thank you my lighthouse for giving me a new beginning

Imbro

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Wed 06/03/09 04:32 PM
I really liked this.Wonderful Write.:smile:

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Wed 06/03/09 04:35 PM
flowerforyou ty 2kids you are always so kind

I really liked this.Wonderful Write.:smile:

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Wed 06/03/09 04:41 PM
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To your lighthouse:heart:

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Wed 06/03/09 04:44 PM
This one is really Wonderful! You did a really good job on this Beautiful poem! ((Chris))flowerforyou

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Wed 06/03/09 04:45 PM
flowers ty Kim

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To your lighthouse:heart:

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Wed 06/03/09 04:46 PM
:smile: ty Linda flowerforyou rhyming is not my strong point at all lol

This one is really Wonderful! You did a really good job on this Beautiful poem! ((Chris))flowerforyou

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Wed 06/03/09 04:58 PM

:smile: ty Linda flowerforyou rhyming is not my strong point at all lol

This one is really Wonderful! You did a really good job on this Beautiful poem! ((Chris))flowerforyou

It doesn't need to rhyme Chris...it's what's in your heart....and that is what makes it poetryflowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou

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Wed 06/03/09 05:00 PM
I rarely even attempt to rhyme lol I know better lol


:smile: ty Linda flowerforyou rhyming is not my strong point at all lol

This one is really Wonderful! You did a really good job on this Beautiful poem! ((Chris))flowerforyou

It doesn't need to rhyme Chris...it's what's in your heart....and that is what makes it poetryflowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou

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Wed 06/03/09 05:01 PM
nice!!!
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Wed 06/03/09 05:07 PM
flowerforyou ty Beckie

nice!!!
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Wed 06/03/09 05:51 PM
WOW!!! This lighthouse you speak of? She is a very very very lucky girl! Beautiful poem, Chris! flowerforyou flowerforyou flowers flowers blushing blushing

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Wed 06/03/09 08:27 PM
flowerforyou absolutely a delight to read! Thank you for letting us share in your wonder & joy :heart: :heart:

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Wed 06/03/09 08:43 PM
flowers ty DAW its a great feeling being guided hand in hand with such a great person leading the way

WOW!!! This lighthouse you speak of? She is a very very very lucky girl! Beautiful poem, Chris! flowerforyou flowerforyou flowers flowers blushing blushing

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Wed 06/03/09 08:43 PM
flowerforyou ty my friend:smile: i'm glad you enjoyed it

flowerforyou absolutely a delight to read! Thank you for letting us share in your wonder & joy :heart: :heart:

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Wed 06/03/09 08:51 PM

flowers ty DAW its a great feeling being guided hand in hand with such a great person leading the way

WOW!!! This lighthouse you speak of? She is a very very very lucky girl! Beautiful poem, Chris! flowerforyou flowerforyou flowers flowers blushing blushing



I can assure you that I understand the feeling Chris, yes, it very much does! flowerforyou