Topic: Where did he go?
zanpactoe's photo
Wed 06/03/09 12:37 AM
When i was born you was there but the next day you went somewhere. Mom thought you be back in an hour or 2, but you said don't wait up. When i was 3 i waited by the christmas tree to see if you will come but you didn't. When i was 18 ready to graduate and become a man, i wanted to see you there but again you weren't there. Now im 65 and ready to die and the last thought is my mind is "Where did you go?"

Queene123's photo
Wed 06/03/09 12:51 AM

When i was born you was there but the next day you went somewhere. Mom thought you be back in an hour or 2, but you said don't wait up. When i was 3 i waited by the christmas tree to see if you will come but you didn't. When i was 18 ready to graduate and become a man, i wanted to see you there but again you weren't there. Now im 65 and ready to die and the last thought is my mind is "Where did you go?"


thats good
my daughter wrote a poem about her dad when she was about 11yrs old (she 26yrs now)
i still have that poem if your interested in reading it

zanpactoe's photo
Wed 06/03/09 12:54 AM
sure

nvkikigirl's photo
Thu 06/04/09 12:07 AM

When i was born you was there but the next day you went somewhere. Mom thought you be back in an hour or 2, but you said don't wait up. When i was 3 i waited by the christmas tree to see if you will come but you didn't. When i was 18 ready to graduate and become a man, i wanted to see you there but again you weren't there. Now im 65 and ready to die and the last thought is my mind is "Where did you go?"


nicely written!:thumbsup: sad

zanpactoe's photo
Thu 06/04/09 10:46 PM


When i was born you was there but the next day you went somewhere. Mom thought you be back in an hour or 2, but you said don't wait up. When i was 3 i waited by the christmas tree to see if you will come but you didn't. When i was 18 ready to graduate and become a man, i wanted to see you there but again you weren't there. Now im 65 and ready to die and the last thought is my mind is "Where did you go?"


nicely written!:thumbsup: sad



THANK U

Queene123's photo
Thu 06/04/09 11:40 PM
here are these poems what my daughter wrote when she was about 11yrs old

what goes on in your mind, is it me your trying to find, are you there, were you there, is it me that you love or do you even care, these are the questions in my mind. where were you when i was born, where were you when my heart was torn. dont you know, i care sometimes i sit and wonder what it would be like to have you around. to have you in my life. what goes on in my mind, when you hear my name is it my heart your trying to find or do you fear that you are so far and never will be near, anyone can be a father but it takes a real man to be a daddy

here is another
where are you
i cant belive what you have done. you've thrown away such happiness memory and fun, me your daughter a bright young girl growing up in a world so cruel, growing up with no father, no father to guide and instruck me but for you i still care. i reach for you, but no one is there. ive seen you twice 2yrs ago and that was very nice, so nice to meet you, nice to see you, watch you and learn from you, but that isent enought, not enough for you to be my dad, you were never there when i needed you to care. you were never around when i slept so sound, where were you when i needed you, where are you now

zanpactoe's photo
Fri 06/05/09 01:10 AM

here are these poems what my daughter wrote when she was about 11yrs old

what goes on in your mind, is it me your trying to find, are you there, were you there, is it me that you love or do you even care, these are the questions in my mind. where were you when i was born, where were you when my heart was torn. dont you know, i care sometimes i sit and wonder what it would be like to have you around. to have you in my life. what goes on in my mind, when you hear my name is it my heart your trying to find or do you fear that you are so far and never will be near, anyone can be a father but it takes a real man to be a daddy

here is another
where are you
i cant belive what you have done. you've thrown away such happiness memory and fun, me your daughter a bright young girl growing up in a world so cruel, growing up with no father, no father to guide and instruck me but for you i still care. i reach for you, but no one is there. ive seen you twice 2yrs ago and that was very nice, so nice to meet you, nice to see you, watch you and learn from you, but that isent enought, not enough for you to be my dad, you were never there when i needed you to care. you were never around when i slept so sound, where were you when i needed you, where are you now



Wow those are nice.