Topic: Anti Poem
isaac_dede's photo
Tue 05/26/09 10:00 PM
Why do you sit and write?
It is for your own delight!
You pretend it's from within
But listen! PRIDE is SIN!
You think you're a prodigee
and say "hey look at me!"
you say "this is going to be a hit!"
now listen up! you aint sh!t!
So now put your pen away
and in the road go and play!
So to reiterate
this is my mandate
Intead of writing poems
in the road you should roam!


FaithfulOne78's photo
Tue 05/26/09 10:11 PM
:wink: very good

Sharris's photo
Tue 05/26/09 10:32 PM

Why do you sit and write?
It is for your own delight!
You pretend it's from within
But listen! PRIDE is SIN!
You think you're a prodigee
and say "hey look at me!"
you say "this is going to be a hit!"
now listen up! you aint sh!t!
So now put your pen away
and in the road go and play!
So to reiterate
this is my mandate
Intead of writing poems
in the road you should roam!




Penning Mandate

I and on the road, the grass
there I played and traveled last
just to take a bit of time
collect the thoughts within, sew rhyme.
for those who would go out of way
it is their glass, how they should play
pretend, reality is traced
poets penned, a saving grace.

Raine Les 5/26/2009


no photo
Tue 05/26/09 10:41 PM
I love amature poetry! (sarcasm)
I love amature pornography! (no sarcasm)

isaac_dede's photo
Tue 05/26/09 10:55 PM
Edited by isaac_dede on Tue 05/26/09 11:32 PM

I love amature poetry! (sarcasm)
I love amature pornography! (no sarcasm)



You can't write so you're torn
and have to resort to porn
With words I can shred
And with another I share a bed
and before you say
"i'm sure he is gay"
let me asure you..
It is woman with which I lay