Topic: If The Sky Falls Tonight
Call_Me_Hunter's photo
Tue 05/26/09 08:12 AM
Edited by Call_Me_Hunter on Tue 05/26/09 08:18 AM
I take a sip from a mixed drink,
and i look at the sky above,
i let my mind drift for a mere second,
and i think of love/
What was, what is, and what will be
what wasn't, what isn't, and what will never be,
and i freeze/
i feel fear and hope wash over me,
Then i look at your face,
forgetting tomarrow,
i love today,
so may the past drift away/
May the sky fall from above,
so tomarrow this feeling, this love,
wont ever change or fade away or become false/
so if the sky falls tonight
i dont mind, just kiss my lips
and let me gaze into your eyes/
If time goes on i think,
no i know,
i'll never have this again,
and now as the sun is setting low
i take comfort and this I know
at this moment i am yours
and you are mine to hold/
so if the sky falls tonight
it would be a dream come true,
because if i have to die may i die in peace,
laying next to you/

(if you dont like it bite me)
laugh


no photo
Tue 05/26/09 08:25 AM
Very nice! :thumbsup:

Gossipmpm's photo
Tue 05/26/09 08:32 AM
Thank god I don't have to bite you!

:heart:

Call_Me_Hunter's photo
Tue 05/26/09 08:33 AM
blushing
thank yousmile2

Call_Me_Hunter's photo
Tue 05/26/09 08:40 AM

Thank god I don't have to bite you!

:heart:



Hey, i dont taste that bad:tongue:

Thank you thoughblushing

MzEm's photo
Tue 05/26/09 02:38 PM
Very good piece....

AngelLight's photo
Tue 05/26/09 02:42 PM
Actually, your write is really good ....I don't think anyone will have to bite you LOL :laughing:

flowerforyou

Call_Me_Hunter's photo
Tue 05/26/09 09:29 PM
Thank you for the compliments, i dont write peoms often but its nice to know i'm good, i feel so lovedsmooched

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Thu 05/28/09 06:44 AM
very nice write, no biting here eitherlaugh

AngelFireDream's photo
Thu 05/28/09 07:09 AM
I liked this very much. Thanks for sharing!