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Change me, rearrange me
The pieces that make me Bobby Can also be reconfigured to make superman if you let them If I let you let them I'm am simple yet complex Neglect me and I will still grow Love me and you will make me whole Even though you know that I know you know the truth My imperfections are what make me perfect Perfection is for the naive ones Superman or supermen, we are but all human Divinity I am, if I am part of god The whole truth and nothing but the truth is a lie Look at me and tell me to my face eye to eye Who cares if you're scared I am too..... You keep telling me think outside the box Understand that I live in a four cornered room Four corners that all this time forever consume That which is not me in a rounded world This is just a ramble of thoughts Nothing in particular just multiple plots To clear my mind and relinquish me from reality Because really....does anyone care anymore? |
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I must be see through today. Very heart felt.
Thank You for sharing. 
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 Very nice..well done
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did u write that poem? it's very good
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Really nice jump...you've got some good writes goin' on...
 I love your statement about imperfections making you "perfect" and about being both human and divine.....beautifully stated. |
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Thanks everyone for your comments...All of these are originals and written by me. I just come to work and sit and write. I actually wrote this one in 10 mins. I have a nack for it I guess...."Write" on people "write" on (pun intended)
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Change me, rearrange me The pieces that make me Bobby Can also be reconfigured to make superman if you let them If I let you let them I'm am simple yet complex Neglect me and I will still grow Love me and you will make me whole Even though you know that I know you know the truth My imperfections are what make me perfect Perfection is for the naive ones Superman or supermen, we are but all human Divinity I am, if I am part of god The whole truth and nothing but the truth is a lie Look at me and tell me to my face eye to eye Who cares if you're scared I am too..... You keep telling me think outside the box Understand that I live in a four cornered room Four corners that all this time forever consume That which is not me in a rounded world This is just a ramble of thoughts Nothing in particular just multiple plots To clear my mind and relinquish me from reality Because really....does anyone care anymore? Good piece. I have to say I am perfectly imperfect myself 
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Change me, rearrange me The pieces that make me Bobby Can also be reconfigured to make superman if you let them 
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to be known and understood, "as is",,,,,seems a universal need. I like your write bobby
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The whole truth and nothing but the truth is a lie Look at me and tell me to my face eye to eye Who cares if you're scared I am too..... I really feel that. People are made to be afraid and most of us need to embrace it more. |
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Change me, rearrange me The pieces that make me Bobby Can also be reconfigured to make superman if you let them If I let you let them I'm am simple yet complex Neglect me and I will still grow Love me and you will make me whole Even though you know that I know you know the truth My imperfections are what make me perfect Perfection is for the naive ones Superman or supermen, we are but all human Divinity I am, if I am part of god The whole truth and nothing but the truth is a lie Look at me and tell me to my face eye to eye Who cares if you're scared I am too..... You keep telling me think outside the box Understand that I live in a four cornered room Four corners that all this time forever consume That which is not me in a rounded world This is just a ramble of thoughts Nothing in particular just multiple plots To clear my mind and relinquish me from reality Because really....does anyone care anymore? |
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