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Edited by
kc0003
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Thu 05/21/09 08:26 PM
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I remember you with snap shots
from my mind I have to... My heart has locked away all feelings All emotions have been put to rest Your absence has changed everything Nothing is the same Not sound Not touch Not taste Nothing And I have to admit, it’s better than numb which, allows a faint sensation Instead; nothing gets through Nothing moves me Not the dim flicker of early evening stars Not the yellow tinted moon hovering on the horizon... But, as I lay here tonight Thinking in ink I relish in the understanding That as long as I am feeling... Nothing I am free To one day...(perhaps soon) Feel everything Once more Kc09 |
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very nice!
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thank you FaithfulOne
i appreciate you taking the time |
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My pleasure sweets
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I think this is one of my favorites. I really like this!!!
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Excellent write my friend.
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I think this is one of my favorites. I really like this!!! oh p i think you have said that to me a number of times (but it never gets old) thank you my dear |
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Excellent write my friend. thank you too my friend |
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I think this is one of my favorites. I really like this!!! oh p i think you have said that to me a number of times (but it never gets old) thank you my dear You know how it is when our minds start to wander. Can I help it if you write another one even more amazing than the last? Or maybe I'm biased because I like your writing? |
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I think this is one of my favorites. I really like this!!! oh p i think you have said that to me a number of times (but it never gets old) thank you my dear You know how it is when our minds start to wander. Can I help it if you write another one even more amazing than the last? Or maybe I'm biased because I like your writing? either way i never tire of your presence |
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This is really good !
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Edited by
JosefQuewl
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Thu 05/21/09 09:06 PM
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I like this very much. The ending is inspirational.
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visiting...
jose... thank you both very much |
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Bound for greatness kc
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Bound for greatness kc you are very kind... thank you |
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There YOU are!!!! I have been missing this ...
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Hope...
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There YOU are!!!! I have been missing this ... Thank you lovely one |
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I remember you with snap shots from my mind I have to... My heart has locked away all feelings All emotions have been put to rest Your absence has changed everything Nothing is the same Not sound Not touch Not taste Nothing And I have to admit, it’s better than numb which, allows a faint sensation Instead; nothing gets through Nothing moves me Not the dim flicker of early evening stars Not the yellow tinted moon hovering on the horizon... But, as I lay here tonight Thinking in ink I relish in the understanding That as long as I am feeling... Nothing I am free To one day...(perhaps soon) Feel everything Once more Kc09 Great piece...so moving... |
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I remember you with snap shots from my mind I have to... My heart has locked away all feelings All emotions have been put to rest Your absence has changed everything Nothing is the same Not sound Not touch Not taste Nothing And I have to admit, it’s better than numb which, allows a faint sensation Instead; nothing gets through Nothing moves me Not the dim flicker of early evening stars Not the yellow tinted moon hovering on the horizon... But, as I lay here tonight Thinking in ink I relish in the understanding That as long as I am feeling... Nothing I am free To one day...(perhaps soon) Feel everything Once more Kc09 Great piece...so moving... Thank you so much |
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