Topic: Secret Admirer
daniel48706's photo
Sat 05/12/07 11:14 AM
While walking around, doing my patrol
I cant stop thinking of the pain in your soul.
Day in, Day out, you look and you wait,
I can't help wonder, if this is the day.

I see the torment, the worry, the strain
I notice your heartache, with or without rain.
Wandering day by day, sunny but gray,
My heart breaks to see you this way.

I want to come over, pull you into my arms,
Not sit by the 'puter, typing away charms.
I want to hold and caress, run my hand through your hair,
While wiping away, the tears and shadows you bear.

A few times now, I have seen you smile,
A smile reaching your eyes, your soul.
I've watched your face, shine bright with life,
Yet not once, have I seen guile or strife.

You truly are GOD'S Angel, my dear
Born of HIS love, raised year by year.
No matter yur hardships, you stop and you pray,
Day by day, no matter which way.

You've been gifted, with a bright, chearful laugh,
A laugh I have watched, in it you Bathed.
Your soul shines throgh, no matter the path,
I wish I was there, to soothe your wrath.

Open your eyes, my Angel Dear,
And know that with you, my love will be near.
I can't help hope, that this is the day,
When our paths do cross, to become "the way".

sweetcountrygirl's photo
Sat 05/12/07 11:17 AM
Daniel, beautiful...
and I hope your day gets here soon,
and she allows you to wipe away the pain!
:heart: flowerforyou :heart:

ellgee1976's photo
Sat 05/12/07 11:42 AM
awww...that's a wonderful poem Daniel, heart warming


hope she knows how lucky she is, and if not..hope she soon finds out!
flowerforyou

itslaughable16's photo
Sat 05/12/07 08:07 PM
yo man, that sum deep shiznit

Gryphyn's photo
Sat 05/12/07 08:17 PM
Excellent, I wonder why I haven't seen your work before? Have I been
asleep again? I hope I see more.

Gbigsmile

TxsGal3333's photo
Sat 05/12/07 10:33 PM
Daniel that was beautiful indeed you should write more.flowerforyou

LAMom's photo
Sat 05/12/07 10:57 PM
Ohhh Daniel Very Beautiful flowerforyou

daniel48706's photo
Sun 05/13/07 03:44 AM
Thank yuo friends, I have, as you can see, found someone else to inspire
me :smile:. I am curently working on another one, right now, and will
post it soon as it is done.

tantalizingtulip's photo
Sun 05/13/07 05:08 AM
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