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Diamond4ever
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Tenderness
Tenderness born anew Alive and well Telling life's tales in pure toned hues, worn out shoes, brand new blues Varied views giving clues to love lost, love gained Sometimes so light Sometimes of weight Either way, tenderness speaks in every shape and complexity Freely given for all to see, becoming one with love and serenity Peace and unease coalesce, fused together with care and finesse Naked Unclothed Vulnerability undressed. © D4ever 2009 05-20-2009 |
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lovely write!
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Tenderness Tenderness born anew Alive and well Telling life's tales in pure toned hues, worn out shoes, brand new blues Varied views giving clues to love lost, love gained Sometimes so light Sometimes of weight Either way, tenderness speaks in every shape and complexity Freely given for all to see, becoming one with love and serenity Peace and unease coalesce, fused together with care and finesse Naked Unclothed Vulnerability undressed. © D4ever 2009 05-20-2009 Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh... Yessssssssssssssss |
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lovely write! Ty TA |
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Very Nice Write
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Hello MisKim Thanks. |
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Tenderness Tenderness born anew Alive and well Telling life's tales in pure toned hues, worn out shoes, brand new blues Varied views giving clues to love lost, love gained Sometimes so light Sometimes of weight Either way, tenderness speaks in every shape and complexity Freely given for all to see, becoming one with love and serenity Peace and unease coalesce, fused together with care and finesse Naked Unclothed Vulnerability undressed. © D4ever 2009 05-20-2009 Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh... Yessssssssssssssss Glad you enjoyed LAMom Ty. |
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Very Nice Write I appreciate your comment/flower IMBM2. Thanks. |
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amazing write-your words read so smoothly across the page
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amazing write-your words read so smoothly across the page Thanks for the compliment pkd |
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very nice!
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Nicely done
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Thank you FO and kc
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Soft and gentle
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very different style of writing that I haven't really seen in awhile (mind you I haven't checked out very many people's poetry yet on here)....but I really like how you make your words move...truly epic...
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Soft and gentle Ty AngelLight! |
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very different style of writing that I haven't really seen in awhile (mind you I haven't checked out very many people's poetry yet on here)....but I really like how you make your words move...truly epic... Thanks a lot BCG! That's very nice of you to say |
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Your soft presence is appreciated. Ty for reading |
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