Topic: The torrent.
greeneyedlady42's photo
Sat 05/12/07 10:05 AM
Drifting in what seems a sea of emotion;
I float aimlessly as the waves encompass
me...Tossing me to and fro.
Nothing to hold onto- No one to save me-
Just bobbing with my head barely above the torrent.
The bitter salty water tries to force itself
upon me and I sputter trying to catch my breath.
Unknown objects swirl round about me grazing
against my flailing limbs.
I try to think of my rescue, but it only seems to make
the situation darker.
Adrift with no landing in sight. Waterlogged, exhausted
and frustrated I just lay back. The current sweeps me
away. Over the coral reef I drift, bound my nothing
limited by everything. My mind wonders back to a better
place and time. A time that sucked
but sure was better than this. How did I get here?
Where am I goint to land. ?
What will become of me?

no photo
Sat 05/12/07 10:47 AM
AS if you were peeking into my soul once again Green....awesome write!!!

sweetcountrygirl's photo
Sat 05/12/07 11:15 AM
Do not think of where you are going
in this time of darkness and sorrow
let the water wash away
cry your tears into the salty wind
Look up and see the light
Beauty surrounds you
even when you don't realize
where your joy went...
When the current takes you to shore
You'll be refreshed once more...



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TxsGal3333's photo
Sat 05/12/07 11:44 PM
Girl glad to see your poetry back once again your words do hit
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LAMom's photo
Sat 05/12/07 11:46 PM
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Welcome home,, its good to see you writing again

Very Powerful ,,, flowerforyou