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Sunset, then darkness.
The doors close To each home, For every fate. Strangled by screams, Unmerciful words That won't be forgiven Until morning. Crawl into bed with him, Hollow and cold. Pretend you love him When he holds you close. And when he chooses To tear you apart; Just lie there quiet, Don't even shout. If he knew the place I go When he takes me, Body and soul. Would he see The tears I cry? Would he see The blood he hides? The walls are my only friends, Keeping secrets only I know. When I lose my mind They let me go. When he finally sleeps I come back from My world. Slowly, unsteady, And still unheard. The walls whisper Their truths to me. Flashbacks haunt me In my dreams. When morning comes I cover up the scene, Like nothing happened, As if it was all a bad dream. The doors open into the world. Neighbors smile, But I can barely see Through this cloud of gray, This darkness that lives within me. He's about to head out the door, Ready for work like every day before. But today, for the very first time, He actually takes a look into my eyes. But he refuses to accept the truth, So he looks away and nods goodbye. He can't see me. No, it's all a lie. |
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very good
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ty redhead
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i'd do you @bi_curious
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evian001 okie.... odd to post to this thread considering it's a poem about abuse/rape, but thank u nonetheless
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i didnt even read the poem. just checked ur profile
---im busted. |
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Yes, I can
Excellent write. Be safe. Be well. |
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It's amazing how often we can take the form of an unnoticed shadow.
Good write |
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thank you to Diamond4ever and Imbroglio
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thank you to Diamond4ever and Imbroglio |
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Very well written and honest. Beautiful write, thank you for sharing it with us.
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Edited by
Bi_CurizGrl
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Wed 05/20/09 12:45 PM
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thank you Meg and Gossipmpm
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((()))
Wow. Poignant doesn't cover it. Ty for sharing. |
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thank you for your comment AngelLight
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2KIDSMOM--how long have you been growing your hair?
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Sunset, then darkness. The doors close To each home, For every fate. Strangled by screams, Unmerciful words That won't be forgiven Until morning. Crawl into bed with him, Hollow and cold. Pretend you love him When he holds you close. And when he chooses To tear you apart; Just lie there quiet, Don't even shout. If he knew the place I go When he takes me, Body and soul. Would he see The tears I cry? Would he see The blood he hides? The walls are my only friends, Keeping secrets only I know. When I lose my mind They let me go. When he finally sleeps I come back from My world. Slowly, unsteady, And still unheard. The walls whisper Their truths to me. Flashbacks haunt me In my dreams. When morning comes I cover up the scene, Like nothing happened, As if it was all a bad dream. The doors open into the world. Neighbors smile, But I can barely see Through this cloud of gray, This darkness that lives within me. He's about to head out the door, Ready for work like every day before. But today, for the very first time, He actually takes a look into my eyes. But he refuses to accept the truth, So he looks away and nods goodbye. He can't see me. No, it's all a lie. Wow... |
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Thanks for sharing.
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Thank you for your comments Mystique42, MzEm, and 2KidsMom
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