Forced to use energy in thought instead of deed
struggling for one's dear life
in the muck amongst the reed

contemplating the pleasured passing of thought or soul
each connected to the other
linked together as a whole

each revolution darker than the one that before came
in an torturously slow descent
into the madness and the shame

a root to grasp seems atop some mountain
seen in thoughts like the clicking pen
never needed to be written down
for they will appear again

JosefQuewl RTH 5/16/09

resilience..there is nothing new under the sun..clear visual
appreciated..
welcome

Ty

Perennial thoughts? Rooting around at subconscious level by chance?

Nicely done!

I really liked this-thanks for posting and welcome

I was trying to explain the obsessive, hopeless thoughts of depression. Thanks for the posts and welcomes!!

Solid write...very nice job

Welcome JQ.

Thanks for the encouragement.