Topic: Thoughts
poeticflight's photo
Sat 05/16/09 10:38 AM
let your words flow softly
lay them gently on angels wing
echoes of their angelic song
as their flight doth message bring
oh hear the words of heaven
captured in winters breeze
sent with but a whisper
their meaning my heart doth seize

just a quick thought... wrote it sitting here
mind racing ... contemplating life... living in a daydream... or an illusion of an existence which never was... are we but a thought in the mind of a greater being ... an undecided project that changes as do our lives.... until that final moment .... when our death in this world is our actual beginning.

oh how the minutes tick away
seconds fill them overflowing
as hours pass us by
soft and gentle sigh
but why

do we cling to who we were
how it used to be
or live a moment as it comes
just wait and we will see

better still... the fight to become... but what of destiny... an unknown future ... battle on ... yet tiss but wasted war... do we dare hope for more.... who commands these waves crashing upon our shore

yes my mind races on..... questions to be asked ...yet to whom.... answers to be found.... not knowing where to look.... our curiosity bound.... contained with only hope.... hope of a brighter day... when words flow so freely ... we live the questions and become the answers we have sought .... realizing ourselves we fought

and now .... I breathe.... I take a breath and calm my wayward mind.... hoping pleasure in my thoughts ... You did find

beautyfrompain's photo
Sat 05/16/09 10:44 AM
nice :wink:

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Sat 05/16/09 11:31 AM
I really like thisflowerforyou

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Sat 05/16/09 07:59 PM
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Sharris's photo
Sat 05/16/09 09:34 PM

let your words flow softly
lay them gently on angels wing
echoes of their angelic song
as their flight doth message bring
oh hear the words of heaven
captured in winters breeze
sent with but a whisper
their meaning my heart doth seize

just a quick thought... wrote it sitting here
mind racing ... contemplating life... living in a daydream... or an illusion of an existence which never was... are we but a thought in the mind of a greater being ... an undecided project that changes as do our lives.... until that final moment .... when our death in this world is our actual beginning.

oh how the minutes tick away
seconds fill them overflowing
as hours pass us by
soft and gentle sigh
but why

do we cling to who we were
how it used to be
or live a moment as it comes
just wait and we will see

better still... the fight to become... but what of destiny... an unknown future ... battle on ... yet tiss but wasted war... do we dare hope for more.... who commands these waves crashing upon our shore

yes my mind races on..... questions to be asked ...yet to whom.... answers to be found.... not knowing where to look.... our curiosity bound.... contained with only hope.... hope of a brighter day... when words flow so freely ... we live the questions and become the answers we have sought .... realizing ourselves we fought

and now .... I breathe.... I take a breath and calm my wayward mind.... hoping pleasure in my thoughts ... You did find

Welcome

Beached

Upon the shore
a sandy gaze
as outward
we will cast,
just a rose
has washed and stays
from drifting
to the vast.
The heart is stayed
upon this ground
though temporal and shifting,
disappearing
sees once more
the sky
as upward lifting.
Take heart to know
as many drink
the hope
you do send,
knowing
whence it cometh,
a brother closer friend.
The beauty from
this single bud
lying in the sand
is knowing that
it is here
because
it was the plan.

Raine Les 5/16/2009

poeticflight's photo
Sun 05/17/09 08:49 AM
Thank you all for the replies. I would love to say I appreciate that others enjoy my writings ... yet some of them come from a source deeper than even I understand.