Topic: Treacherous Moon
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Tue 05/12/09 10:31 AM
My indifference was my last hope
Wish it could fool him today
A magician of words he was,
The story on my face long wiped out

His question was brief, My answer timeless
“Miss her”? His voice probed.
“No I do not”, I put ice to shame.
His acerbic laughter shredded my claim.

Hidden behind the blanket of the night,
I repeated my words emphatically..
Only to be betrayed by the sleeping moon…
As it rose from behind the dark smoke.

In the silver mirror of the lake,
The tears on my face sparkled bright
As I sat there helpless and exposed
And he silently vanished in the moonlight

Leaving his contempt and the moon behind

d4tc's photo
Tue 05/12/09 10:46 AM
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Nice Write.
Welcome to Mingle.

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Tue 05/12/09 10:50 AM
Thank you indeed. Wrote this one a couple of years back.

MzEm's photo
Tue 05/12/09 10:55 AM
Very nice write...

pkh's photo
Tue 05/12/09 03:22 PM
very nice and welcome

Lilypetal's photo
Tue 05/12/09 03:25 PM
Beautiful! flowerforyou