Topic: Real Tricky!!
A_Zo's photo
Tue 05/05/09 11:56 PM
ONLY CAME HERE TO BE REAL NOT CATCH THE BACK OF FEMALES HEELS, CUZ LADIES HAVE THOSE FEELINGS, JUST A WOMENS INTUTION SOME SILLY MEN DISMISS THE ACHE AND SAY 2 U STOP TRIPPIN'. HE'S GONE WITHOUT HESITATION HES OUT ON A MISSION NOT PAYING YOUR PAIN SOME ATTENTION. BUT ME I'M REAL 100% THIS IS THE TRUTH FROM BOTTOM OF MY FOOT 2 THE HAIR ON MY LEADER (ALTHOUGH FEET ARE MUCH CUTIER) WON'T FEED U ANY LINES, JUST RECITE A FEW RYHMES, IF THE LORD LET'S ME I'LL TELL YOU YOUR FINE, THIS IS BEING "REAL" AND "REAL" IS JUST BEING ME. I'LL SAY A LIMERICK OR TWO RIGHT BEFORE ASKING YOU "BETWEEN US WHAT DO YOU SEE." LISTEN 2 MY SOFT INCANTATIONS STRAIGHT TO YOU IN FORMS HAIKU MY CHANNEL OF COMMUNICATION SO COLORFUL IN DIALOGUE BUT DISGUISE FOR SUBTLE FLIRTATIONS.

JOUSTING!!

WORDFUL WIT TEASING YOUR BODYS ATTRACTION, AN EXCHANGE OF IDEAS SO CANDID THE MIND FORGETS ABOUT QUESTIONS, YOU EMBRACE CONVERSATION, WHILE DISMISING ALL Q & A's. IS IT MINDLESS CHIMERA WITH A HINT OF DOUBT? WITH VERSE AFTER VERSE YOUR BODY & MIND TÊTE-À-TÊTE SENSING SOME NEW INTERVENTION, IM REAL IT'S REAL HOW YOU LAY YOUR HEAD ON MY POETIC CUSHION AND LET ME SPREAD MY VERBAL BLANKET. NOT IN PITY ONLY TO SOOTHE & RELEIVE ALL SKEPTICISM & SUSPICION. A REAL MANS HEART-TO-HEART HONESTY IS THE #1 SLEEPING AID FOR A "WOMANS INTUITION" REMEMBER I'M "REAL" SO "REAL",THAT I UNDERSTAND & SYMPATHIZE WITH THE FEMALE EMOTION. I'M REAL,SO REAL, IM A REAL MAN WHO KNOWS HOW AND WILL ALWAYS KEEP SHOWING, LOVE FOR A WOMAN WITH
KIND & INNOVATING "COMPASSION"

I JUST LIKE THE WAY I AM
R-----E-----A-----L...!
Scripted By
Zo

d4tc's photo
Wed 05/06/09 09:47 AM
rofl
I like the LIMERICK line. That was awesome!

I'm D4 keeping it real. :thumbsup:
It's the best we can offer!

I usually don't read ALL CAPS because it's kind
of hard on my eyes but I wanted
to know what you had to say, and that was a fun read.
Welcome to Mingle. drinker

MzEm's photo
Wed 05/06/09 09:51 AM
Digging the verses...Very nice...

A_Zo's photo
Wed 05/06/09 04:10 PM
Thank You for being curious.. Lol I don't usually write in caps, but when I was finished with this one I felt that it should speak in a way of being "BOLD" not in a arrogant way just in a this is me a "REAL" guy!!

A_Zo's photo
Wed 05/06/09 04:10 PM
Thank You MzEMflowerforyou

d4tc's photo
Wed 05/06/09 04:15 PM

Thank You for being curious.. Lol I don't usually write in caps, but when I was finished with this one I felt that it should speak in a way of being "BOLD" not in a arrogant way just in a this is me a "REAL" guy!!


When you put it like that.... :wink:
I can appreciate the emphasis of CAPS used to convey your message in a bold manner. It works! That was the impression I felt when reading your write.
Your intentions was a success! drinker