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Topic: A Love That Will Prevail
AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Tue 05/05/09 10:44 PM Edited by AngelLight on Tue 05/05/09 11:08 PM
A LOVE THAT WILL PREVAIL Under the sunlight, beneath the open sky, I rest with your presence filling me inside. Though you are far away, and I am over here, all I do is close my eyes and distance disappears. I touch your face then your skin, now your braided hair. There is no space between us as shadows fade midair. The moon has risen gently, the sky has shown its light; there’s nothing to intrude upon this blissful night. We relish in this moment, forever is right here. We take a breath together knowing Love as pure and sheer. We touch lips tenderly and bypass illusioned veil, for we know it cannot separate a Love that will prevail. ~© JDS 05/05/2009~

nvkikigirl Joined Thu 03/05/09 Posts: 3942	Tue 05/05/09 10:47 PM
this is my favorite, absolutely breathtaking...

metalwing Joined Fri 11/14/08 Posts: 26218	Tue 05/05/09 10:50 PM
You have an amazing talent.

sexymami7979 Joined Fri 11/16/07 Posts: 337	Tue 05/05/09 10:52 PM
Wow that is so beautiful

AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Tue 05/05/09 10:57 PM
this is my favorite, absolutely breathtaking... Ty Sweetheart...so glad you enjoyed it Was just inspired by the inherent beauty of my Beloved.

AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Tue 05/05/09 10:58 PM
You have an amazing talent. Ty for your kindness

AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Tue 05/05/09 11:00 PM
Wow that is so beautiful Thank you mami. It's nice to meet you. Ty for reading and commenting.

darkowl1 Joined Sat 01/12/08 Posts: 13060	Tue 05/05/09 11:01 PM
incredibly well written

AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Tue 05/05/09 11:04 PM
incredibly well written Thanks darkowl Lovin' ur pic....soo sweet!

sexymami7979 Joined Fri 11/16/07 Posts: 337	Wed 05/06/09 12:28 AM
Wow that is so beautiful Thank you mami. It's nice to meet you. Ty for reading and commenting. Your Welcome Hun.. I enjoyed it

ArtGurl Joined Sun 04/08/07 Posts: 17722	Wed 05/06/09 12:31 AM
beautifully felt

Jimmy59 Joined Thu 11/13/08 Posts: 1139	Wed 05/06/09 12:34 AM
This is so real one can only feel the love that you have for this person.

bastet126 Joined Fri 12/07/07 Posts: 15553	Wed 05/06/09 05:11 AM
aaaahhhmazing angel!!

AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Wed 05/06/09 09:55 AM
beautifully felt AG Ty darlin'.

AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Wed 05/06/09 09:57 AM
This is so real one can only feel the love that you have for this person. Thanks Jimmy! That's great to hear.

MisKim323 Joined Sat 06/28/08 Posts: 14563	Wed 05/06/09 09:58 AM
{{{{{Angel}}}}} Can't wait to find mine

AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Wed 05/06/09 09:59 AM
aaaahhhmazing angel!! Ty (((((beautiful lady)))))

MisKim323 Joined Sat 06/28/08 Posts: 14563	Wed 05/06/09 10:00 AM
aaaahhhmazing angel!! Ty (((((beautiful lady)))))

AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Wed 05/06/09 10:03 AM
{{{{{Angel}}}}} Can't wait to find mine I can't wait either baby! And, you will find, or he will find you, one way or another! (and, my friend, prayers continue for your special need )

AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Wed 05/06/09 10:07 AM
aaaahhhmazing angel!! Ty (((((beautiful lady))))) Kim, you shower so many with the flowers of your Love....the generosity of your heart seems to have no limits!