Topic: Threads and Bows
Sharris's photo
Sat 05/02/09 08:08 AM


Threads And Bows

Silk threads played
by pulling bows
across a violin
how soft the tones
so allude as feathers
fall on those
bared, exposed
eyes wide shut
blind to understand
what we wear
is not our own
feathers leave our hand.

Raine Les 5/2/2009

crimsonphoenix's photo
Sat 05/02/09 09:08 AM
really good flow and imagery. flowerforyou

if you add a chrous it would make a great song.