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Those who dress
in borrowed feathers will feel the itch either weather feather by feather the feathers will fall until one stands defeathered no feathers at all all defeathered all in nude there's no way one can delude borrowed feathers are others feathers whether or not silk or leather. |
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Those who dress in borrowed feathers will feel the itch either weather feather by feather the feathers will fall until one stands defeathered no feathers at all all defeathered all in nude there's no way one can delude borrowed feathers are others feathers whether or not silk or leather. A tempting piece, beautifully drawn, exposing. my immediate thoughts, may I share. Threads And Bows Silk threads played by pulling bows across a violin how soft the tones so allude as feathers fall on those bared, exposed eyes wide shut blind to understand what we wear is not our own feathers leave our hand. Raine Les 5/2/2009 |
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thumbs up to both of you |
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amazing how even written word can make us feel vulnerable...great write(s)!!
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OP's poem reminds me of jaberwocky in how it flowed and how it was abtract and wacky. good job
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