Topic: Not Feeling Weak
lurchs_sister's photo
Wed 04/29/09 06:06 PM
Feeling like today was a total waste
And in my mouth it has left a bad taste
I've run again this crazy rat race
Only to recieve a slap in the face

You've made me feel all I did was sin
No matter the loss I never will win
I've given enough to make others die
And still you turn and make me cry

This has been my final act I'm done for now
So here I stand taking my final bow
Forgiveness is something I do not seek
Save that for a day when I'm feeling weak

The guilt you dealt was wrongly placed
But the hurt it caused has been faced
I've lived out the days gone by
Tomorrow's the day for which now I try

I'll not carry the burden of that untold sin
I carry my head high with a confident grin
I'm sorry for the things you say you feel
But the happiness I've found in this place is real


ArtGurl's photo
Wed 04/29/09 06:14 PM
(((V))) flowerforyou :heart: flowerforyou

nvkikigirl's photo
Wed 04/29/09 06:17 PM
:thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup:

MirrorMirror's photo
Wed 04/29/09 06:25 PM

Feeling like today was a total waste
And in my mouth it has left a bad taste
I've run again this crazy rat race
Only to recieve a slap in the face

You've made me feel all I did was sin
No matter the loss I never will win
I've given enough to make others die
And still you turn and make me cry

This has been my final act I'm done for now
So here I stand taking my final bow
Forgiveness is something I do not seek
Save that for a day when I'm feeling weak

The guilt you dealt was wrongly placed
But the hurt it caused has been faced
I've lived out the days gone by
Tomorrow's the day for which now I try

I'll not carry the burden of that untold sin
I carry my head high with a confident grin
I'm sorry for the things you say you feel
But the happiness I've found in this place is real


flowers

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Wed 04/29/09 06:28 PM
Excellent work :thumbsup:

wannacuddlewthme's photo
Wed 04/29/09 06:34 PM
Niceflowers

AngelLight's photo
Wed 04/29/09 07:26 PM
Good to be moving on, knowing what is yours and what is not flowerforyou :heart:

DaveyB's photo
Wed 04/29/09 09:02 PM
Moving forward often means leaving things behind. It's those things we take with us are what truly matter.

lurchs_sister's photo
Wed 04/29/09 09:05 PM
Thank you!

(((AG)))
(((NVK)))
(((Lee)))
(((Sarc)))
(((Cuddle)))
(((Angel)))


:heart::heart::heart:

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Thu 04/30/09 07:16 AM
nicely done (((V)))flowerforyou

MzEm's photo
Thu 04/30/09 08:43 AM
You go girl!

lurchs_sister's photo
Thu 04/30/09 11:52 AM
(((David))) didn't mean to skip you
(((PKD)))
(((Mz)))

:heart::heart::heart:

Thanks for the support!!

upstatebob's photo
Thu 04/30/09 05:01 PM
beautiful.......isn't it amazing how a little bit of pain brings out the true poet in all of us?

lurchs_sister's photo
Fri 05/01/09 01:04 AM
Thanks Bob!!!flowerforyou