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Topic: Firefly
Lilypetal Joined Wed 02/25/09 Posts: 4052	Mon 04/27/09 06:36 AM Edited by Lilypetal on Mon 04/27/09 06:36 AM
FIREFLY Witness fire, your eyes Engulfing all of me Witness fire as you hold The cold heart that is me Melt, Melt the fire The fire that is you My love, my firefly Passion is your fire I am water as we entwine Consumed by your fire Melted the heart to find The fire evaporates me

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MichaelATL44 Joined Wed 05/14/08 Posts: 178	Mon 04/27/09 07:09 AM
Nice!

Lilypetal Joined Wed 02/25/09 Posts: 4052	Mon 04/27/09 07:47 AM
Thank you so much!

d4tc Joined Tue 04/15/08 Posts: 2754	Mon 04/27/09 07:57 AM
a great visual

Lilypetal Joined Wed 02/25/09 Posts: 4052	Mon 04/27/09 08:52 AM
a great visual Thanks D!

Unknow Joined Sat 03/15/08 Posts: 1972	Mon 04/27/09 12:15 PM Edited by Unknow on Mon 04/27/09 12:17 PM
thank you that was very good I don't recall ever reading any of your poems before i guess because i'm not around that much anymore but when i'm here i hope to read more of your poems

Lilypetal Joined Wed 02/25/09 Posts: 4052	Mon 04/27/09 12:32 PM
thank you that was very good I don't recall ever reading any of your poems before i guess because i'm not around that much anymore but when i'm here i hope to read more of your poems Thank you. I've only posted a couple so far.

DTHRomeo Joined Wed 06/20/07 Posts: 43387	Mon 04/27/09 12:35 PM
So nice

Lilypetal Joined Wed 02/25/09 Posts: 4052	Mon 04/27/09 12:48 PM
So nice

MirrorMirror Joined Fri 10/26/07 Posts: 89680	Mon 04/27/09 01:25 PM
FIREFLY Witness fire, your eyes Engulfing all of me Witness fire as you hold The cold heart that is me Melt, Melt the fire The fire that is you My love, my firefly Passion is your fire I am water as we entwine Consumed by your fire Melted the heart to find The fire evaporates me

AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Mon 04/27/09 01:30 PM
FIREFLY Witness fire, your eyes Engulfing all of me Witness fire as you hold The cold heart that is me Melt, Melt the fire The fire that is you My love, my firefly Passion is your fire I am water as we entwine Consumed by your fire Melted the heart to find The fire evaporates me and purifies! Beautiful!

MzEm Joined Wed 03/25/09 Posts: 1558	Mon 04/27/09 01:38 PM
Well done LilyPetal!

Lilypetal Joined Wed 02/25/09 Posts: 4052	Mon 04/27/09 02:01 PM
Thank you all, I appreciate the comments so much!

Unknow Joined Sat 03/15/08 Posts: 1972	Mon 04/27/09 10:57 PM
thank you that was very good I don't recall ever reading any of your poems before i guess because i'm not around that much anymore but when i'm here i hope to read more of your poems Thank you. I've only posted a couple so far. Well i hope you have a couple of more

LAMom Joined Tue 12/12/06 Posts: 26866	Tue 04/28/09 11:57 AM
Beautiful

Lilypetal Joined Wed 02/25/09 Posts: 4052	Tue 04/28/09 02:16 PM
Thank you LAMom!

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