Topic: Honest feedback please!
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Tue 04/21/09 10:31 AM
Angel of Desire



Glistening eyes full of precious diamonds
With her shimmering silver wings
The beauty of the most magnificent angel
Soothing painful tears as she sings


The smile that she wears so well
Silences the grief of the lonely night
She wraps her arms around your fragile body
Nothing could seem more right.

Resting her delicate chin on your shoulder
She whispers softly inside your ear
The silence crumbles at the sound of her voice
Telling you all you needed to hear

A tender feeling carresses your soul
Her warmth remains even after she backs away
You stand in awe as you watch her body glow
While you search for something to say

You wanted to know everything
Who is this majestic angel you see?
I didn't want to be the one to tell you
It will never be me.


Georami's photo
Tue 04/21/09 10:47 AM
doode that was good. it brought a tear to mah eye -sniffle- but no really I thought it was nice

TwilightsTwin's photo
Tue 04/21/09 05:59 PM
Beautifully done.

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Tue 04/21/09 06:54 PM
I thought it was very good:heart: flowerforyou
Hope to read more of your workflowerforyou