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Angel of Desire
Glistening eyes full of precious diamonds With her shimmering silver wings The beauty of the most magnificent angel Soothing painful tears as she sings The smile that she wears so well Silences the grief of the lonely night She wraps her arms around your fragile body Nothing could seem more right. Resting her delicate chin on your shoulder She whispers softly inside your ear The silence crumbles at the sound of her voice Telling you all you needed to hear A tender feeling carresses your soul Her warmth remains even after she backs away You stand in awe as you watch her body glow While you search for something to say You wanted to know everything Who is this majestic angel you see? I didn't want to be the one to tell you It will never be me. |
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doode that was good. it brought a tear to mah eye -sniffle- but no really I thought it was nice
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Beautifully done.
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I thought it was very good
Hope to read more of your work |
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