Topic: Totally hurt
no photo
Sat 04/11/09 08:12 AM
Totally Hurt

This heart of mine is broken
unable to be mended,
as their pieces have
become too brittle
to be put together again.

This mind of mine is lost
unable to be found,
as it hides somewhere
in the closet of shame
exposed and naked.

These eyes of mine are blind
unable to see the truth
as the once truth
was found to be my lie
not honesty

These ears of mine are deaf
unable to hear a sound,
as others feel their silence
is truly best kept golden
when I was around.

This mouth of mine is mute
unable to utter a word,
as words thought were found
best left unsaid.

This nose of mine is pegged closed
trying to filter the atmosphere
as the air around me
is not longer pure.

These feet of mine are out of step
unable to keep up with the rhythm of life,
as they no longer feel life
vibrating within the timber floors.

These hands of mine stay cupped
trying to contain my pride
yet all they collect
are oceans of salty tears

This body of mine is dying
unable to be heated,
as it sleeps alone
in an unmade bed.

You left, leaving
no love behind for
me to live on.

Sadly now my
invisible
souls dies a slow
death.



DaveyB's photo
Sat 04/11/09 08:19 AM
Gave me chills and tugged at my heart. Nicely done and if this is current for you you have my heart felt wishes for future happiness.flowerforyou

Holly4459's photo
Sat 04/11/09 08:56 AM
:cry: very moving...*sniff*

no photo
Sat 04/11/09 12:57 PM

Gave me chills and tugged at my heart. Nicely done and if this is current for you you have my heart felt wishes for future happiness.flowerforyou


Thanks, I am ok now...

MirrorMirror's photo
Sat 04/11/09 01:13 PM

Totally Hurt

This heart of mine is broken
unable to be mended,
as their pieces have
become too brittle
to be put together again.

This mind of mine is lost
unable to be found,
as it hides somewhere
in the closet of shame
exposed and naked.

These eyes of mine are blind
unable to see the truth
as the once truth
was found to be my lie
not honesty

These ears of mine are deaf
unable to hear a sound,
as others feel their silence
is truly best kept golden
when I was around.

This mouth of mine is mute
unable to utter a word,
as words thought were found
best left unsaid.

This nose of mine is pegged closed
trying to filter the atmosphere
as the air around me
is not longer pure.

These feet of mine are out of step
unable to keep up with the rhythm of life,
as they no longer feel life
vibrating within the timber floors.

These hands of mine stay cupped
trying to contain my pride
yet all they collect
are oceans of salty tears

This body of mine is dying
unable to be heated,
as it sleeps alone
in an unmade bed.

You left, leaving
no love behind for
me to live on.

Sadly now my
invisible
souls dies a slow
death.



flowerforyou