Topic: Counter Manipulative
d4tc's photo
Fri 04/10/09 08:46 PM
Manipulative Counters

When She calls you a bastard because she is drunk
A Jedi somewhere craves the hand to face wave
I just keep my hands in my pocket
fumbling change(s)


I am a bastard
Skies Blue
And I am a bastard

"You Bastard"

I flipped it past her
I said

"I am a Pastor?"

heated she screams
a tree hit by lightening

"You are a motherfracking bastard"

A galactic moment.
I had to laugh here.

"lol. Wh-at? I am another wandering passed here?"

Blue Sky
she is still screaming
"I don't know why!"

"Jason! Lee! Miskofski! --

I inject,

"Your hating me in Versace?"

she ejects,

"I hate you! really I do!"

"Really."

"Seriously? Even in Versace?"

"Who is talking here?"

she stops me,
cun'tinues

"...As."

"As what!? Rachel!? Go ahead!! Say it again!!
I am
a lover wanting more here?

Something you could not hold
Dear

A
man in
love with,
what here? say it.

Show
me, have us the decency
or let go
of me.







;.

bastet126's photo
Fri 04/10/09 08:58 PM
too many great innuendo's in there to point any one out...a great write! flowerforyou

d4tc's photo
Fri 04/10/09 09:53 PM
Thank flowerforyou You bastet!

Missed having you around.
Glad you see you back.
Be even more glad when I see a new post from
you one day :wink:
No pressure... I have all night! laugh
I'm kidding. No rush. :smile:

MirrorMirror's photo
Fri 04/10/09 11:32 PM

Manipulative Counters

When She calls you a bastard because she is drunk
A Jedi somewhere craves the hand to face wave
I just keep my hands in my pocket
fumbling change(s)


I am a bastard
Skies Blue
And I am a bastard

"You Bastard"

I flipped it past her
I said

"I am a Pastor?"

heated she screams
a tree hit by lightening

"You are a motherfracking bastard"

A galactic moment.
I had to laugh here.

"lol. Wh-at? I am another wandering passed here?"

Blue Sky
she is still screaming
"I don't know why!"

"Jason! Lee! Miskofski! --

I inject,

"Your hating me in Versace?"

she ejects,

"I hate you! really I do!"

"Really."

"Seriously? Even in Versace?"

"Who is talking here?"

she stops me,
cun'tinues

"...As."

"As what!? Rachel!? Go ahead!! Say it again!!
I am
a lover wanting more here?

Something you could not hold
Dear

A
man in
love with,
what here? say it.

Show
me, have us the decency
or let go
of me.







;.
:thumbsup:

Huaca's photo
Sat 04/11/09 05:43 AM
Show
me, have us the decency
or let go
of me.


Brutal...good write!

ArtGurl's photo
Sat 04/11/09 09:30 AM
Ouch! That was painful ... in a a brilliantly written kind of way flowerforyou :heart: