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The Break Up
M.E. Martin I wish I didn’t miss you so much I can’t believe I let you go even though I knew it was for our good but this hurts Our last goodbye was way too soon Or was it right on time To keep my peace of mind I guess I thought we would see The end of tomorrows together But now it is yesterdays that has us joined In forever memories that play like Movies in my mind past and present Seeming to blend endlessly, seamlessly Tears I didn’t know I shed until I awake Because the pillow is damp and echoes Of your name on my lips as if I was calling Out your name in dreams that I can’t Seem to recall but haunt me throughout The day like wisp of a half written melody Reaching out for you in the middle of the night Only to find you gone chills me to my soul And loneliness becomes my companion for the night What a poor substitute for my beloved now gone And now the day starts again and you are still not here Although I know it was best for you and me, I miss you |
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 so excelent
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"And loneliness becomes my companion for the night
What a poor substitute for my beloved now gone" 
Yep. I know the feeling. Very nicely worded. 
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 very nice indeed
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The Break Up M.E. Martin I wish I didn’t miss you so much I can’t believe I let you go even though I knew it was for our good but this hurts Our last goodbye was way too soon Or was it right on time To keep my peace of mind I guess I thought we would see The end of tomorrows together But now it is yesterdays that has us joined In forever memories that play like Movies in my mind past and present Seeming to blend endlessly, seamlessly Tears I didn’t know I shed until I awake Because the pillow is damp and echoes Of your name on my lips as if I was calling Out your name in dreams that I can’t Seem to recall but haunt me throughout The day like wisp of a half written melody Reaching out for you in the middle of the night Only to find you gone chills me to my soul And loneliness becomes my companion for the night What a poor substitute for my beloved now gone And now the day starts again and you are still not here Although I know it was best for you and me, I miss you
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@M&M----Thank you so much...
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@Horseracer----Thank you for your kind words...
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@d4tc----I am glad you liked it...thanks for feelling me on this one...
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@nvkikigirl---Thank you for the positive strokes...
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So very nice...and understandable...
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@2KidsMom---thank you for the kind words of encouragement...
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lovely. just lovely
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@Angel---Thank you so much...
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i think that poem is dedicated for me
 ooouuuccchhhh!
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Lovely
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@Tessa----Yeah it hurts but then you realize, they are ex's for a reason LOL
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@Meg---Thank you very much...
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...such beautiful melancholy ... nice to read you MzEm
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So sad but true.
Only when 1/2 is gone are we whole. 
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very nice piece
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