Topic: The Downward Spiral
ShadJV's photo
Tue 04/07/09 12:16 PM
Edited by ShadJV on Tue 04/07/09 12:17 PM
When I loved you, you brought me up
Way up with you, past the birds
Past the clouds, past the sky
Higher and higher we flew
I trusted you and knew
You'd never let me go

But then you dropped me
And I thought, "She'd grab my hand
She'd try to catch me"
But no, I started falling
And despite my calling
You ignored me in my downward spiral

Now I am sinking lower and lower
And I try to ask for help
From someone, anyone
But strangers don't care
They just stop and stare
They're afraid of being pulled down

Instead, they push me along
Saying, "Nobody wants to work for you
You're not worth the effort"
And they're searching for love
But they're looking above
They aren't willing to work for it

And every person who lets me pass by
Just helps me sink even deeper
You were the one who started this
Everyone just ends it
And my falling just won't quit
How will I stop?

Must I hit the bottom?
Will no one see what I can give back?
Just because she dropped me, am I worthless to others?
I have plenty to give
Just help me to live
I promise it won't waste your time
In the end, I'll be yours and you mine
Just reach out your hand, and everything will be fine
Just trust me...

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Tue 04/07/09 07:53 PM
Awwww....Nice poem by the way...flowerforyou

ShadJV's photo
Wed 04/08/09 10:22 AM
Thanks.

MirrorMirror's photo
Thu 04/09/09 05:09 PM

When I loved you, you brought me up
Way up with you, past the birds
Past the clouds, past the sky
Higher and higher we flew
I trusted you and knew
You'd never let me go

But then you dropped me
And I thought, "She'd grab my hand
She'd try to catch me"
But no, I started falling
And despite my calling
You ignored me in my downward spiral

Now I am sinking lower and lower
And I try to ask for help
From someone, anyone
But strangers don't care
They just stop and stare
They're afraid of being pulled down

Instead, they push me along
Saying, "Nobody wants to work for you
You're not worth the effort"
And they're searching for love
But they're looking above
They aren't willing to work for it

And every person who lets me pass by
Just helps me sink even deeper
You were the one who started this
Everyone just ends it
And my falling just won't quit
How will I stop?

Must I hit the bottom?
Will no one see what I can give back?
Just because she dropped me, am I worthless to others?
I have plenty to give
Just help me to live
I promise it won't waste your time
In the end, I'll be yours and you mine
Just reach out your hand, and everything will be fine
Just trust me...
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