this one is funny

Ooppsss

Since you posted in the 'rate my profile' forum, I assume you want feedback?

You should add something to your profile! There is nothing there to inspire interest. What are your goals, what type of girl are you interested in meeting, what do you like to do on dates?

Based on what you have written, you probably should pay attention to grammar and spelling. The one 'sentence' you typed is cumbersome to read.

You seem friend though, based on this post. I'm sure you will do well! Enjoy!

is my profile better now?

It is much better but one thing I would re-think ---

You shouldn't really mention your child. You indicated you have a kid in the 'stats' portion so you don't need to repeat that fact, and the rest is really TMI for an interenet -- elaborating on your visitation, etc.

Your profile should be about you rather than your child. Children shouldn't even come into your dating life until you are in a serious relationship.

If you read most of the other 'rate my profile' posts, this advice seems to echo through the majority.

Good job though! I'm sure you can find something else to talk about in your description; travel plans, educational goals, etc. Hell, make up a funny story for entertainment and show your kooky side! Something to make a girl smile and write you a message!