Topic: A new one........No Title Yet
PetiteKitten's photo
Sun 05/06/07 12:17 PM
Written right now, because it's in my head.......



I shall sit and let things flow.
I do not know where this will go.
I pray each day and every night.
But sometimes I feel that things are not right.
I have this wall around my heart.
To break it down, would be a hell of a start.
I'm trying not to fall too fast.
For when that happens, things don't last.
I wish I could be inside your mind.
To know what you think, from time to time.
One minute I feel as if my soul is free.
Especially when you look at me.
But then I get this dreaded feeling.
So I lay in my bed, and I stare at the ceiling.
I don't want my heart broken again.
So the wall will stay, until you prove what's true within.
I love the way you look at me.
But sometimes deeper, through my eyes I see.
I want to see you face to face.
But I will go at your own pace.
Whenever you want me, I will be here.
So for now, I hope I have nothing to fear.
Just be honest with me and I'll do the same.
For now, this is it...A poem I've gained.

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Sun 05/06/07 12:23 PM
:heart: flowerforyou I feel your heart and im in your thoughts
This fear can stop you in your tracks, but better to fear than to give
at first, slow is REAL, and slow is GOOD, YOU will find YOUR love and
him find YOU through this gift of heart will weigh
more than YOUR fear, and you will not ever have anymore tears!!!
:heart: flowerforyou ((((hugs))))) and keep on keeping ON,,,
Great words to show us all YOUR heart! And we to have felt, fear of
pain...:heart:

PetiteKitten's photo
Sun 05/06/07 12:24 PM
Thanks Iam..............

just2friends's photo
Sun 05/06/07 12:33 PM
kitten rocks, i love her poetry =)

PetiteKitten's photo
Sun 05/06/07 12:34 PM
Thanks Bill :smile:

Hotchikita's photo
Sun 05/06/07 01:00 PM
flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou

beautiful girl

PetiteKitten's photo
Sun 05/06/07 01:02 PM
Thanks Hun!!

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Sun 05/06/07 02:44 PM
beautiful Jess

:wink:

PetiteKitten's photo
Sun 05/06/07 02:45 PM
Thanks Chris:smile:

daniel48706's photo
Sun 05/06/07 02:51 PM
it moves the soul and heart love. it really does.

CATBW56's photo
Sun 05/06/07 03:05 PM
Beautiful words from the heart:heart: :heart: :heart:

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Sun 05/06/07 03:08 PM
sounds like a woman in a glass jar to me. everyone can see her beauty
and she can see theirs but neither on can touch the other. so the title
should be "beauty in a bottle"

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Sun 05/06/07 04:03 PM
Good idea

sxpak2go

TxsGal3333's photo
Sun 05/06/07 04:23 PM
Very good one girl and sxpak title fits it goodbigsmile

LAMom's photo
Sun 05/06/07 05:54 PM
Beautiful flowerforyou

PetiteKitten's photo
Sun 05/06/07 05:59 PM
That poem was written for my sweetheart..........

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Sun 05/06/07 06:02 PM
:heart: Lucky dude.........:heart: flowerforyou

PetiteKitten's photo
Sun 05/06/07 07:15 PM
Aw thanks........Yea, he better think he's lucky, laugh

GaMail50's photo
Sun 05/06/07 07:17 PM
Nice poem PK