pic included, what is your honest impression.

lol words please lol

looks like a beast turning into a man ...profile and pic...

Pic is odd. If you really want a connection show your face. Don't hide it.
And it sounds like you think you can do anything as long as you are honest about it.
Don't talk so much about that Just say what you do, what you like, what you want...ect and by all means Please Be Honest!
But what do I know?


Yeah I found the edit button :)

Well honestly? I would leave all that out. We all are human and make mistakes. No one is perfect. When you meet that special woman and want to share that information then thats fine after you meet and get comfortable with them, but now? I think they are running for the hills...

so much to take in....one point is obvious, i must make a few changes. more input will be greatly appreciated. What about it ladies is this guy right, does more open info scare you women or what?

your profile is more about your attitude towards people and attitude towards yourself....but still says nothing about yourself beside employment.

BIG FOOT EXISIT!!!

lol yes i have big feet lol

i see your point baabs....*pondering*

Change "not proud of" to "learned from past mistakes". Also feild to field on top line.

with this response you can add "takes constructive criticism well"

HI

The main pic has got to go! It can be a fun extra pic but I wouldn't click on your profile -- and many others wouldn't either.

Your introduction is ok. A bit preachy but if you take away some of that, and start a new paragraph about the type of lady that interests you, and make it fun -- what you like to do on dates, etc, I think your profile will be fine!

Have fun!

ok ok ill add a new pic, i just liked my wolf hands but i guess it is a little PG when im not PG anymore....more PG-13 now ok im gonna work on it asap.

looking better now add some of rhe hings you like to do for fun and what kind of lady you want in your life

thats the best pic i could come up with for now and i didnt want to lie or sound too cheesey so i just stopped writing, anything else a person wants to know they can just ask.


any more input on the updated profile?

I AM A FIRM ADVOCATE IN GIVING SCARY INFORMATION FIRST. JOIN MY FORUM CLUB.

BRAVO! Very nice redo! You will do just fine!

Tell ya what I think....don't worry about the "big foot" and all of that. If that is what you're comfortable with then thats what youre comfortable with. You say youre looking for someone to relate to you, more or less. So youre looking for someone that kind of "fits into your puzzle." I say what ya do is kind of "color" it up a little. Make your profile a little more "sunny" and "shiny".

Go on it and ask yourself,
"If I was this woman who I want so badly, would I enjoy reading this page?"

Instead of making a want ad

Make a page explaining who you are. Know what I mean?

Nobody wants to read a "help wanted" add. I get what youre saying on your profile and respect all of it, I do. I am down with it. The pictures..forget all of that. That is who you are. If the "woman" out there doesnt like that, then she won't like you. No reason to change that. But when it comes to the words you use to respresent yourself you need to make it more appealing. Like I said...say what you would want to see if you were, "that woman"

Know what I'm saying?

yea i get what you mean, but women are just so random its just easier to be me and let her seek me out like luke and yoda you know. but i guess i can come off as a little rough ended but i think that i sound phoney when I try to speak or write certian ways.