Topic: Random Poetry
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Thu 03/26/09 08:09 PM
Cause and effect
to take it away.
when everything couldn't be enough
to make you feel the same.
it's not something i would reccommend
but it's a way to live
all the dark inside your light
has us so complicated.
when friends rise from the ashes
to bid one last farewell
we all cannot stand to listen
to your story they tell it so wrong.
the opening of a book
aged in the fact that no one could hate you,
or your old words.
with a steady grasp you hold the wheel,
and turn it in the direction desired.
fullfill the life
for which we aspire.

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Thu 03/26/09 08:10 PM
i write alot of random stuff....

how is everyone

johncarl's photo
Thu 03/26/09 08:31 PM
that is good. and you are good and i feel good after i reading your worklove

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Thu 03/26/09 08:37 PM
lol
thank you.
positive feedback is always appreciated
=]

Sharris's photo
Thu 03/26/09 10:31 PM

i write alot of random stuff....

how is everyone


I like your thoughts, deliberate, concise, probing into the layers..
random, perhaps not, interpretive, maybe.