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I created you a monster, ravaged by the hands of love Broken by the violence of trying to let you go. A tempestuous rage building in the fire of your voice Every moment tainted with the apparition of your soul The yearning to hold on takes over all I am Going through the motions so the demons don’t take hold I don’t know how to let you go, fate has led me to you, And its desire has left me damned |
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Great Write sara!
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Wow...
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 Hi Sara 
"i like that" nice to see you again |
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you too, dear, long time no see.
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Very nice writing that I can definitely relate to. Thanks for sharing
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I sense an eerie stillness...as in death.
...powerful depiction of what it might be like to be in an enmeshed relationship, devoid of freedom and Love 
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