Topic: the time before i know you
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Fri 03/20/09 09:15 PM
my heart races you're near
i remember to breathe

i'm taking these moments
this bit of distance
to look at you
sitting right next to me

like taking turns
you watch me leave
i see you too

taking my time
enjoying my time
tracing your face
letting you know

these hellos, how are yous
and smiles, looks away

will morph once it's said
the time i know you

LAMom's photo
Fri 03/20/09 09:19 PM
Time is so Beautiful,, Isn't it :heart:

no photo
Fri 03/20/09 10:06 PM
Short and sweet but says everything...Wonderful..flowerforyou

Jess642's photo
Sat 03/21/09 04:41 AM
The time before I know you,
is gone.

When I saw you, I knew you.

I felt you, I heard you

I held you, I teased you.




When I saw you, I knew you

and for that, I am grateful.

:heart:

pkh's photo
Sat 03/21/09 06:20 AM
good write

AngelLight's photo
Sat 03/21/09 07:17 AM

my heart races you're near
i remember to breathe

i'm taking these moments
this bit of distance
to look at you
sitting right next to me

like taking turns
you watch me leave
i see you too

taking my time
enjoying my time
tracing your face
letting you know

these hellos, how are yous
and smiles, looks away

will morph once it's said
the time i know you



Beautiful write darlin' flowerforyou

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Sat 03/21/09 10:59 AM
Edited by iam4u on Sat 03/21/09 11:00 AM
Time is what we all take for granted.
And to live each day, hour, and minute knowing it surrounds you.
Makes each day feel, like your experiencing it all for the first time.
And in any and all passing's, a simple touch is greatly FELT..

Nice write .....drinker whoops,,,lol wink

s1owhand's photo
Sat 03/21/09 06:10 PM
tasted her never looked upon her
though we raced recklessly

on

winning and winning
losing and losing

our paths secretly covered in springtime morning mist
translucent humidity

breathing newness
no end in sight
of us

:heart:

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Sat 03/28/09 02:15 PM
ive got my own private s1owhand

thank you for posting such nice thoughts creative boardflowerforyou

MirrorMirror's photo
Sat 03/28/09 02:17 PM

my heart races you're near
i remember to breathe

i'm taking these moments
this bit of distance
to look at you
sitting right next to me

like taking turns
you watch me leave
i see you too

taking my time
enjoying my time
tracing your face
letting you know

these hellos, how are yous
and smiles, looks away

will morph once it's said
the time i know you
flowerforyou