Topic: poem: stopping watch
tb74's photo
Wed 03/11/09 04:48 PM
stoping watch
auchtung slides
tremors of more
vibrationary presage
of rolling shocks
tempered keel
ten years in a day
ten years
waiting is so last century
so now we are waiting free
would for welcome
would is slowing
until it has become
expressible ecstatic
from the vine
any old time
time is palpable
time is something more

lurchs_sister's photo
Wed 03/11/09 07:29 PM
I like this T

Here's to moving on with lifeflowerforyou

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Thu 03/12/09 09:35 AM
Excellent write w/ very nice flow.:smile: drinker

DaveyB's photo
Thu 03/12/09 09:39 AM
Very nice read... thank you

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Thu 03/12/09 06:07 PM
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