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Itching to scratch away to say fuggity fug I love this Bugs Bunny funny How cartoons take away pain like dumb kids on shrooms in lonely rooms drop kicking themselves in the kazoom whom their soon boom lit fused stale tucked tail waves gray graved down a oneing road dried dirty stained suits dress up memories of tragedies in time destined to go they will try it all buy it all sniff it snort short bad sports first foremost start to a road forsaken all heavy used tires they lay infront of reved up dealers driving margined lines sugar coated the drugs are love to a weak mind that doesn't find it real reason to live without them clutched can they crutch what they want more or less tight they touch their exhaust pipes anti-health blows into their mouths and out their ears and they hear by listening to the sober side of boredom they aren't just stupid they are real and stupid and those are the ones waiting for a cupid to write at them a song to carry on belted the welts shift assertiveness skips through loose lips they loop it motivation for health neglected you use you I do too abuse to choose acres accrued bad mood taken from Hue midnight blue metamorphis-sized zombified daddified mummified corpses |
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wow
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nimble at numbing, very well done.
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I got
tongued tied in the pace of your race feeling the wind numbing my face my brain melting like a lungfull of mace go back rewind NO NO NO Don't erase The boom of the toons calms the pain deep within my brain coming or going real or insane I'm finding myself looking for the spinning drain washed up like tidal rain knowing that after a whirl I can come back and do it again Sorry J didn't mean to hijack your poem The wheels got to spinning and I couldn't make them stop I love the flow and thought of yours that was able to make me do this thanks |
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Yes, wow. Very descriptive and well done.
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Excellent...
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After reading that I feel like I"m drugged ... Nice
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A very contemplative write.Well done my friend.
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i seen to many misguided souls in my life not to reply to this what ever you think the drugs giveith they take away ten fold along with your soul
Nice write jason (tea) |
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