Topic: Drugged...
d4tc's photo
Wed 03/11/09 10:59 AM

Itching to
scratch away
to say
fuggity fug
I love
this Bugs
Bunny
funny
How cartoons
take away pain
like dumb kids
on shrooms
in lonely rooms
drop kicking
themselves in
the kazoom
whom their
soon boom
lit fused
stale
tucked tail
waves
gray graved
down a oneing road
dried dirty
stained suits
dress up
memories
of tragedies
in time
destined to go
they will try it all
buy it all
sniff it
snort
short
bad sports
first foremost
start
to a road forsaken
all heavy
used tires
they lay infront of
reved up
dealers driving
margined
lines
sugar coated
the drugs are love
to a weak mind
that doesn't find
it real reason to
live without them
clutched can they
crutch what they want
more or less tight
they touch
their exhaust pipes
anti-health
blows into their mouths
and out their ears
and they hear
by listening to
the sober side
of boredom
they aren't just stupid
they are real and stupid
and those are the ones
waiting for a cupid
to write at them a song
to carry on
belted
the welts shift
assertiveness skips
through loose lips
they loop it
motivation
for health
neglected
you use you
I do too
abuse to choose
acres accrued
bad mood
taken from Hue
midnight blue
metamorphis-sized
zombified
daddified
mummified
corpses

bgeorge's photo
Wed 03/11/09 11:07 AM
wowflowerforyou

Differentkindofwench's photo
Wed 03/11/09 11:26 AM
nimble at numbing, very well done.

lurchs_sister's photo
Wed 03/11/09 12:20 PM
I got
tongued tied
in the pace
of your
race
feeling the
wind numbing
my face
my brain
melting
like a lungfull
of mace
go back
rewind
NO NO NO
Don't
erase
The boom
of the toons
calms the
pain
deep within
my brain
coming or going
real or insane
I'm finding myself
looking for
the spinning
drain
washed up
like tidal
rain
knowing that
after a
whirl
I can come back
and do it
again



Sorry J didn't mean to hijack your poemohwell
The wheels got to spinning and I couldn't make them stop

I love the flow and thought of yours that was able to make me do this thanks:banana:

no photo
Wed 03/11/09 01:13 PM
Yes, wow. Very descriptive and well done.

no photo
Wed 03/11/09 01:59 PM
Excellent... :thumbsup:

DaveyB's photo
Wed 03/11/09 08:00 PM
After reading that I feel like I"m drugged bigsmile ... Nice

no photo
Thu 03/12/09 09:31 AM
A very contemplative write.Well done my friend.:smile: drinker

no photo
Thu 03/12/09 06:24 PM
i seen to many misguided souls in my life not to reply to this:heart: what ever you think the drugs giveith they take away ten fold along with your soul:heart:

Nice write jasondrinker (tea)