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etihn
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Sun 03/08/09 06:33 AM
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Rituals
I saw a man the other day while walking my dog The other day while walking his dog a man saw me We saw each other With a nod of my head I continued walking He continued to walk whilst nodding his head We acknowledged each other My dog started barking The dog of the other owner started barking Our cordial exchange now challenged I spoke to him in polite tone In polite tone he spoke to me We spoke to each other How interesting those animals are unaware of subtle human rituals While humans are unaware that we live by them |
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really like the flow of this
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Interesting write,very nice
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Edited by
etihn
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Sun 03/08/09 07:51 AM
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Hello pkh & pkd1220
As always lovely to see You’re more important than your comments to me And my appreciation is written as in family ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() |
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