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Topic: the burnt leaves
tb74 Joined Wed 01/02/08 Posts: 124	Tue 03/03/09 01:39 PM
the burnt leaves acrid sultry taste clings to the barrel clings to to the coat that is tufted dark faint in outline as dusk of the surrendering day is must in so many ways that impulse the creative then a kindling of when and so i say that ways are malleable and transit the arc between could and would to sublimely sit fleeting in apogee triumph the mixture bits the blend the homerun home and shifting gait from dash to gallop and marching in the say scuffed boots and shadow five oclock brrringgg bolt upright in stride and launching so softly slide the dancing lamps round rolling oh so this is so the flip side season

MirrorMirror Joined Fri 10/26/07 Posts: 89680	Tue 03/03/09 01:41 PM
the burnt leaves acrid sultry taste clings to the barrel clings to to the coat that is tufted dark faint in outline as dusk of the surrendering day is must in so many ways that impulse the creative then a kindling of when and so i say that ways are malleable and transit the arc between could and would to sublimely sit fleeting in apogee triumph the mixture bits the blend the homerun home and shifting gait from dash to gallop and marching in the say scuffed boots and shadow five oclock brrringgg bolt upright in stride and launching so softly slide the dancing lamps round rolling oh so this is so the flip side season

2KidsMom Joined Tue 09/30/08 Posts: 58206	Tue 03/03/09 01:42 PM


Ainjel Joined Sat 01/24/09 Posts: 3610	Tue 03/03/09 06:16 PM
Tantalising...

Sharris Joined Sun 12/10/06 Posts: 7300	Tue 03/03/09 09:50 PM
the burnt leaves acrid sultry taste clings to the barrel clings to to the coat that is tufted dark faint in outline as dusk of the surrendering day is must in so many ways that impulse the creative then a kindling of when and so i say that ways are malleable and transit the arc between could and would to sublimely sit fleeting in apogee triumph the mixture bits the blend the homerun home and shifting gait from dash to gallop and marching in the say scuffed boots and shadow five oclock brrringgg bolt upright in stride and launching so softly slide the dancing lamps round rolling oh so this is so the flip side season a sultry write, my thoughts..thank you Rustle ever and slowly a breath taken in on the verge as almost begins in the deep aubergine awakening light rustle dances as wind and the willow bends RL 3/3/2009

DaveyB Joined Wed 10/10/07 Posts: 18786	Wed 03/04/09 07:39 AM
Nice write, hard to read to someone over the phone though

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