Topic: My best friend My brother
FarmBoyWithStyle's photo
Thu 02/26/09 09:57 AM
i dont know how to describe this. i wrote it about a friend of mine, we known each other since we were babies, i wrote it about things about himself he might not know, but i wrote it as if he wrote it about himself. i guess when you read it you will see what i mean. and granted you all dont know him but hopefully i can get some imput in terms if the writing itself he also is a marine.

I am a very driven individual. I let nothing stand in my way when i

set a goal. I am second to none both mentally and physically.

Everytime someone says i cant i do. I am both the unstoppable force

and the unmoveable object. My body,my mind,and my soul are as

unwavering as a tank, but my heart has a shield as thick as wax

paper, both because its larger then most and because it is a rookie

in terms of experience, all it has known is heartbreak. I am the

greatest friend someone could ask for, as well as the most feared

foe. there is no task to large or to small I wont drop everything

for. I can tell when someone is lying to me, but would take a bullet

for someone that hates me. I am always doing well, just not always

fantastic. My character is unmatched, my charisma is second to none. I am the few
I am the proud
I am me
I am justin jackett

pkh's photo
Thu 02/26/09 10:00 AM
very nice

no photo
Thu 02/26/09 10:05 AM
drinker drinker drinker

lurchs_sister's photo
Thu 02/26/09 10:08 AM
Edited by lurchs_sister on Thu 02/26/09 10:10 AM
OOHRAH!!!!!
SEMPER FI!!

This gives me goosebumps!

I'm the sister of a deceased Marine and it felt like I was reading about him.

Thanks for sending the tears rolling down my face and please don't change a thing it is perfect the way it is.

If you can send it to him and tell him you care it will make him feel good!

To Justin I give my thanks and appreciation.

iamgeorgiagirl's photo
Thu 02/26/09 10:31 AM
Cool verses


I like it!



FarmBoyWithStyle's photo
Thu 02/26/09 11:16 AM
thanks, yall.idk i got alot of stuff to post i just didnt know if it would be good enough to go on here with everyone else awsome stuff. and i have poems and stuff to. that was just idk.

LAMom's photo
Thu 02/26/09 11:25 AM
flowerforyou

lurchs_sister's photo
Fri 02/27/09 09:11 AM

thanks, yall.idk i got alot of stuff to post i just didnt know if it would be good enough to go on here with everyone else awsome stuff. and i have poems and stuff to. that was just idk.


Your thoughts, words, and feelings are always welcome here and I think you're good so please add more as I would love to read what you have.

DaveyB's photo
Fri 02/27/09 10:18 AM

i dont know how to describe this. i wrote it about a friend of mine, we known each other since we were babies, i wrote it about things about himself he might not know, but i wrote it as if he wrote it about himself. i guess when you read it you will see what i mean. and granted you all dont know him but hopefully i can get some imput in terms if the writing itself he also is a marine.

I am a very driven individual. I let nothing stand in my way when i

set a goal. I am second to none both mentally and physically.

Everytime someone says i cant i do. I am both the unstoppable force

and the unmoveable object. My body,my mind,and my soul are as

unwavering as a tank, but my heart has a shield as thick as wax

paper, both because its larger then most and because it is a rookie

in terms of experience, all it has known is heartbreak. I am the

greatest friend someone could ask for, as well as the most feared

foe. there is no task to large or to small I wont drop everything

for. I can tell when someone is lying to me, but would take a bullet

for someone that hates me. I am always doing well, just not always

fantastic. My character is unmatched, my charisma is second to none. I am the few
I am the proud
I am me
I am justin jackett


Excellent write Style (which I'd say you have in spades)

no photo
Fri 02/27/09 07:11 PM
drinker Very cool write,,very cool friend...
BE ALL YOU CAN BE.....and I know you WILL,,wink,drinker Ohh WAH!!!