Topic: dog
jimz's photo
Wed 02/25/09 06:26 PM
im in the
field
of grass

the grass
leads
into a lake

my eyes
popping

back and
forth

but im
not
seeing
all
that much

but with
my nose
i not only
smell you
i smell how
you feel

but it is
my sixth
sense

the one
when i turn
my head
right before
you
attack

i flee
on the
grass

the hunted
and the hunter

and jump
into the lake

there is
a stick
floating

i bite it
and swim

back
to land

wannacuddlewthme's photo
Wed 02/25/09 06:35 PM
Good One:thumbsup:

JasonSB123's photo
Wed 02/25/09 06:37 PM
Careful observation leads to empathy...

Caninishly well spoken.

no photo
Wed 02/25/09 07:00 PM
makes me want to run with the big dogs drinker drinker

no photo
Wed 02/25/09 07:02 PM

im in the
field
of grass

the grass
leads
into a lake

my eyes
popping

back and
forth

but im
not
seeing
all
that much

but with
my nose
i not only
smell you
i smell how
you feel

but it is
my sixth
sense

the one
when i turn
my head
right before
you
attack

i flee
on the
grass

the hunted
and the hunter

and jump
into the lake

there is
a stick
floating

i bite it
and swim

back
to land



A lot of visuals and deeper meaning packed into this one....:heart:

kc0003's photo
Wed 02/25/09 08:07 PM
very nice jim (dog)

smokin

no photo
Thu 02/26/09 01:56 AM
Sounds like my dog...

LAMom's photo
Thu 02/26/09 08:39 AM
Brilliant,,, Its within that one see's, feel's and breath's in another:heart:

pkh's photo
Thu 02/26/09 08:40 AM
very nice Jim