re-uped profile

Im aroused

Back to the desk, friend.

Lose the negative comments, you are far too young to state burn-out issues. Besides, it will NOT draw in a woman. Takes honey to attract ...

Work on spelling and grammar. It matters to many people. Even if it isn't your particular gift, ask someone to lend a writer's hand. We all have different gifts, forms of intelligence.

You sound good, and bright, in the positive comments. I'd like to see you package/sell yourself better, by heeding the constructive criticism.

Then relax and breathe. Take your time, you have a great deal of it! Why rush?

i agree with dancere.
you're young...look at the positive...
a few 'screw overs' makes you stronger
lets hear your good points

two

Take out anything mentioning drama and anything negative.

well i thought i had some good points in there. and ya'll look into my age too much. just because im only 21 doesnt mean i havn't been ****ed over badly. and grammer. yea ill work on that, just aint my thing. but some of the ways i have been screwed over and the excuses i got for it, yall for feel the same way or worse, trust me on that. but if i do have my good points in there wouldnt it be a good thing to include how i feel, and whats happened its better then saying everything is all peachy, when its not? otherwise i would be attracting a girl without her knowing the full story and that doesnt seem fair.

A negative profile is probably not going to attract who you want to attract.

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Could you please read the the fifth rate me forum rule?

i think your story is something that should come out over time when you get to know someone.

if i were looking for someone...i wouldn't be attracted to someone already posing the bad things about past relationships. i know it sucks to be stepped on but the fact is that you ARE young...young enough to adapt and young enough to try to let it go.

live life...have fun with it...and show the next "her" that you are worth taking that chance on.