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I’m falling
I’m falling far and deep There’s no way to keep Standing on the precipice To maintain this fine Balancing act And there’s no going back I’m being propelled forward At lightening quick speed Fueled by this ungodly need With nothing to slow my descent Nothing to stop my fall I close my eyes as I realize I’m going Down Down Down I’m scared Soul bared Wide open to Dissection Harsh assessment Cold rejection Of all I am But what does It all mean What good is The capacity To love If you can’t Take that chance And dance On the head Of a pin? So I give in Arms opened Ready to fly Taking a gamble Willing to give It my all Wondering All the while If you’ll watch Me hit the ground Mutilated and Torn or will you Put yourself Out there To catch me When I fall? |
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To jump before knowing might not be a good showing.
Anyone with heart would throw themselves before your dismay. I know I would because your a friend and a beautiful person. Great read and the unknown will lay, to a new day,wink,lol |
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Very nicely done, (((MsWiz)))!! I like that!!
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Really nice!
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wonderful write
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I’m falling I’m falling far and deep There’s no way to keep Standing on the precipice To maintain this fine Balancing act And there’s no going back I’m being propelled forward At lightening quick speed Fueled by this ungodly need With nothing to slow my descent Nothing to stop my fall I close my eyes as I realize I’m going Down Down Down I’m scared Soul bared Wide open to Dissection Harsh assessment Cold rejection Of all I am But what does It all mean What good is The capacity To love If you can’t Take that chance And dance On the head Of a pin? So I give in Arms opened Ready to fly Taking a gamble Willing to give It my all Wondering All the while If you’ll watch Me hit the ground Mutilated and Torn or will you Put yourself Out there To catch me When I fall? nice |
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Edited by
Sojourning_Soul
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Sun 02/15/09 11:00 AM
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<------- rushes in with a ladder... or net
I'd never let you crash, but if you desire the fall for excitement, I've got ya luv! |
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Someone worth catching....
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What good is
The capacity To love If you can’t Take that chance And dance. This portion struck a cord with me Alicia. Many of us have the capacity to love but have been robbed of spirit and heart. Closing off that desire. Maybe that is a sign of hitting bottom with no where to go but up? |
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<------- rushes in with a ladder... or net I'd never let you crash, but if you desire the fall for excitement, I've got ya luv! <<-----always knows she can count on him ... |
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Someone worth catching.... Oh you are so sweet, thank you ! |
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What good is The capacity To love If you can’t Take that chance And dance. This portion struck a cord with me Alicia. Many of us have the capacity to love but have been robbed of spirit and heart. Closing off that desire. Maybe that is a sign of hitting bottom with no where to go but up? I believe so my friend. Time to move up now ... |
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To jump before knowing might not be a good showing. Anyone with heart would throw themselves before your dismay. I know I would because your a friend and a beautiful person. Great read and the unknown will lay, to a new day,wink,lol Thank you Terry my friend ~ Im glad you liked this one Red~! ((MM)) Thank you pk, I always value your opinion sweetlady... Thank you very much Anon~it's much appreciated |
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You stand tempting
gravities edge taunting us teetering on it's ledge If you should fall and nets brake we would answer the call and create for you a new fate If my arms should shatter know that one by one we here would catch you as steps on a ladder The skies are blue perfect day to fly so what say you you up there how is the view care to give it a try? |
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You stand tempting gravities edge taunting us teetering on it's ledge If you should fall and nets brake we would answer the call and create for you a new fate If my arms should shatter know that one by one we here would catch you as steps on a ladder The skies are blue perfect day to fly so what say you you up there how is the view care to give it a try? <<---turning around, closing eyes with arms spread wide and falling down....down...down.. Beautiful Raw.... |
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I'm down here waiting.....................
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I'm down here waiting..................... As long as you aren't holding a sharp stick for me to land on, we're good to go! |
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I'm down here waiting..................... As long as you aren't holding a sharp stick for me to land on, we're good to go! |
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I'm down here waiting..................... As long as you aren't holding a sharp stick for me to land on, we're good to go! |
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*Extending both arms*
Disclaimer : No sharp objects down here |
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