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Topic: Falling
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Sun 02/15/09 09:39 AM
I’m falling
I’m falling far and deep
There’s no way to keep
Standing on the precipice
To maintain this fine
Balancing act
And there’s no going back
I’m being propelled forward
At lightening quick speed
Fueled by this ungodly need
With nothing to slow my descent
Nothing to stop my fall
I close my eyes as
I realize I’m going
Down
Down
Down

I’m scared
Soul bared
Wide open to
Dissection
Harsh assessment
Cold rejection
Of all I am
But what does
It all mean
What good is
The capacity
To love
If you can’t
Take that chance
And dance
On the head
Of a pin?

So I give in
Arms opened
Ready to fly
Taking a gamble
Willing to give
It my all
Wondering
All the while
If you’ll watch
Me hit the ground
Mutilated and
Torn or will you
Put yourself
Out there
To catch me
When I fall?

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Sun 02/15/09 09:48 AM
To jump before knowing might not be a good showing.
Anyone with heart would throw themselves before your dismay.
I know I would because your a friend and a beautiful person.


Great read and the unknown will lay, to a new day,wink,lol
flowerforyou :heart: drinker :wink: :smile:

Redsoxfan1's photo
Sun 02/15/09 10:07 AM
Very nicely done, (((MsWiz)))!! I like that!!flowers flowers flowers flowers

Anonymous30's photo
Sun 02/15/09 10:13 AM
Really nice!

pkh's photo
Sun 02/15/09 10:27 AM
wonderful write

MirrorMirror's photo
Sun 02/15/09 10:30 AM

I’m falling
I’m falling far and deep
There’s no way to keep
Standing on the precipice
To maintain this fine
Balancing act
And there’s no going back
I’m being propelled forward
At lightening quick speed
Fueled by this ungodly need
With nothing to slow my descent
Nothing to stop my fall
I close my eyes as
I realize I’m going
Down
Down
Down

I’m scared
Soul bared
Wide open to
Dissection
Harsh assessment
Cold rejection
Of all I am
But what does
It all mean
What good is
The capacity
To love
If you can’t
Take that chance
And dance
On the head
Of a pin?

So I give in
Arms opened
Ready to fly
Taking a gamble
Willing to give
It my all
Wondering
All the while
If you’ll watch
Me hit the ground
Mutilated and
Torn or will you
Put yourself
Out there
To catch me
When I fall?





flowerforyou niceflowerforyou

Sojourning_Soul's photo
Sun 02/15/09 10:57 AM
Edited by Sojourning_Soul on Sun 02/15/09 11:00 AM
<------- rushes in with a ladder... or net

I'd never let you crash, but if you desire the fall for excitement, I've got ya luv! :wink:

:heart: flowers

d4tc's photo
Sun 02/15/09 11:17 AM
Someone worth catching.... flowers

no photo
Sun 02/15/09 11:40 AM
What good is
The capacity
To love
If you can’t
Take that chance
And dance.

This portion struck a cord with me Alicia. Many of us have the capacity to love but have been robbed of spirit and heart. Closing off that desire. Maybe that is a sign of hitting bottom with no where to go but up?

no photo
Sun 02/15/09 05:29 PM

<------- rushes in with a ladder... or net

I'd never let you crash, but if you desire the fall for excitement, I've got ya luv! :wink:

:heart: flowers


<<-----always knows she can count on him ...:heart:

no photo
Sun 02/15/09 05:29 PM

Someone worth catching.... flowers


Oh you are so sweet, thank you ! blushing :heart:

no photo
Sun 02/15/09 05:30 PM

What good is
The capacity
To love
If you can’t
Take that chance
And dance.

This portion struck a cord with me Alicia. Many of us have the capacity to love but have been robbed of spirit and heart. Closing off that desire. Maybe that is a sign of hitting bottom with no where to go but up?


I believe so my friend. Time to move up now ...

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Sun 02/15/09 05:32 PM

To jump before knowing might not be a good showing.
Anyone with heart would throw themselves before your dismay.
I know I would because your a friend and a beautiful person.


Great read and the unknown will lay, to a new day,wink,lol
flowerforyou :heart: drinker :wink: :smile:


Thank you Terry my friend ~:heart:

Im glad you liked this one Red~!:heart:
:heart:

((MM))

Thank you pk, I always value your opinion sweetlady...:heart:

Thank you very much Anon~it's much appreciated :heart:

RawB's photo
Sun 02/15/09 05:59 PM
You stand tempting
gravities edge
taunting us
teetering on it's ledge

If you should fall
and nets brake
we would answer the call
and create for you
a new fate

If my arms should shatter
know that one by one
we here would catch you
as steps on a ladder

The skies are blue
perfect day to fly
so what say you
you up there
how is the view
care to give it a try?







no photo
Sun 02/15/09 06:13 PM

You stand tempting
gravities edge
taunting us
teetering on it's ledge

If you should fall
and nets brake
we would answer the call
and create for you
a new fate

If my arms should shatter
know that one by one
we here would catch you
as steps on a ladder

The skies are blue
perfect day to fly
so what say you
you up there
how is the view
care to give it a try?









<<---turning around, closing eyes with arms spread wide and falling down....down...down..

Beautiful Raw....

no photo
Sun 02/15/09 06:45 PM
I'm down here waiting.....................

no photo
Sun 02/15/09 07:02 PM

I'm down here waiting.....................


As long as you aren't holding a sharp stick for me to land on, we're good to go!

no photo
Sun 02/15/09 07:03 PM


I'm down here waiting.....................


As long as you aren't holding a sharp stick for me to land on, we're good to go!
not a stick pitchfork

no photo
Mon 02/16/09 02:37 PM



I'm down here waiting.....................


As long as you aren't holding a sharp stick for me to land on, we're good to go!
not a stick pitchfork


scared scared shocked offtopic scared

DTHRomeo's photo
Mon 02/16/09 03:03 PM
*Extending both arms*

Disclaimer : No sharp objects down here :wink:

flowerforyou

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