This room is filled with smoke. It brings tears to my eyes as they frantically search the smoke filled place for any piece of evidence i'll survive. Life is against me, pressing on my entire being. Its choking, suffocating, getting hard to breathe. Your betrayal to me is to much, i'm begging you for mercy. In all honesty, i want you to feel this almost unbearable suffocation. I want you to choke on your lies, on the screaming silence that keeps you awake at night. i want you to see how you wronged me, and how i fell with your shattered promise to catch me. This is almost over, the darkness is setting in, and i can feel my chest ache with each shortened breath. They're becoming shorter as i struggle for the air to fill my lungs, for the relief that never comes. I'm running, full speed, and i take the leap off the edge, free falling through the air, even you can't save me..........

WOW...THAT WAS AMAZING!!! KNOW THAT EXACT FEELING

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Great Write. It made me feel claustrophobic

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