Topic: small life
deepheartwaiting's photo
Sun 02/08/09 03:37 PM
I remember the days of a house full of folks
of laughter and joy and the same old jokes
of family extended and love from my man
when we'd fish from the dock or walk hand in hand
of a church that was close and supported each other
of the accents of stories from his mother and others.
told in a southern comfortable way
just like their food that made you want to stay

My life was expanded in so many directions
and though there was pain, it felt like perfection

Now its me and the four walls
and of course my work
and surviving through a series of jerks
I don't need a lot but miss my old friends
and hugs and his smile when the day ends
a prince may be out there
but perhaps we only get one
I've had the best so maybe I am done.

(not a but poetic - but just real)

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Sun 02/08/09 04:15 PM
i beg to differ i think it's a very good poem:heart: You sound like a sweet honest person I think you'll find what you seekdrinker

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Sun 02/08/09 04:22 PM
Sounds like a piece from the heart. Very nice, I liked this

deepheartwaiting's photo
Sun 02/08/09 05:28 PM

i beg to differ i think it's a very good poem:heart: You sound like a sweet honest person I think you'll find what you seekdrinker



thank you - I'm just not sure sweet and honest is "in" these days flowerforyou flowers

deepheartwaiting's photo
Sun 02/08/09 05:31 PM

Sounds like a piece from the heart. Very nice, I liked this


thanks Ron - it IS from the heart- I just keep trying to figure out when my world got so small...except for all you great on-line friends.

so, don't laugh, but I think I'm going to join a women's barbershop group. The one here in Tampa is one of the best internationally. That and getting Saturday tickets for the Rays will get me out of the house. I wish I liked car racing...I hear the Nascar folks are great!:wink:

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Sun 02/08/09 05:38 PM


i beg to differ i think it's a very good poem:heart: You sound like a sweet honest person I think you'll find what you seekdrinker



thank you - I'm just not sure sweet and honest is "in" these days flowerforyou flowers


It's always in:heart:
One thing for sure that pic seems to be in today

deepheartwaiting's photo
Sun 02/08/09 05:53 PM



i beg to differ i think it's a very good poem:heart: You sound like a sweet honest person I think you'll find what you seekdrinker



thank you - I'm just not sure sweet and honest is "in" these days flowerforyou flowers


It's always in:heart:
One thing for sure that pic seems to be in today

you mean the "don't bleed us"? that's something I designed...it was therapeutic :o)

carold's photo
Sun 02/08/09 06:14 PM
Smiles DH this brought tears to my eye Girlie

deepheartwaiting's photo
Sun 02/08/09 06:18 PM

Smiles DH this brought tears to my eye Girlie


Thanks Carol! You always bring a smile to mine!

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Sun 02/08/09 07:33 PM




i beg to differ i think it's a very good poem:heart: You sound like a sweet honest person I think you'll find what you seekdrinker



thank you - I'm just not sure sweet and honest is "in" these days flowerforyou flowers


It's always in:heart:
One thing for sure that pic seems to be in today

you mean the "don't bleed us"? that's something I designed...it was therapeutic :o)


It works:banana:

deepheartwaiting's photo
Mon 02/09/09 04:23 PM





i beg to differ i think it's a very good poem:heart: You sound like a sweet honest person I think you'll find what you seekdrinker



thank you - I'm just not sure sweet and honest is "in" these days flowerforyou flowers


It's always in:heart:
One thing for sure that pic seems to be in today

you mean the "don't bleed us"? that's something I designed...it was therapeutic :o)


It works:banana:


its available on CafePress.com - I'll have to revise it if they pass that mess tomorrow. The bottom of the design say "Americans against the Stimulus Theft Package" - I'll have to drop that.

carold's photo
Mon 02/09/09 08:56 PM


Smiles DH this brought tears to my eye Girlie


Thanks Carol! You always bring a smile to mine!
Hugs your so sweet :)

flame1cutie's photo
Mon 02/09/09 08:58 PM

I remember the days of a house full of folks
of laughter and joy and the same old jokes
of family extended and love from my man
when we'd fish from the dock or walk hand in hand
of a church that was close and supported each other
of the accents of stories from his mother and others.
told in a southern comfortable way
just like their food that made you want to stay

My life was expanded in so many directions
and though there was pain, it felt like perfection

Now its me and the four walls
and of course my work
and surviving through a series of jerks
I don't need a lot but miss my old friends
and hugs and his smile when the day ends
a prince may be out there
but perhaps we only get one
I've had the best so maybe I am done.

(not a but poetic - but just real)

That was beautiful.flowerforyou flowerforyou

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Mon 02/09/09 10:56 PM
REAL and POET can be REAL COOL!!!!!!:heart: drinker flowerforyou smokin

deepheartwaiting's photo
Tue 02/10/09 05:03 AM

REAL and POET can be REAL COOL!!!!!!:heart: drinker flowerforyou smokin


thanks!!