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People love enjoy life Living happy Not to their fullest because their fullest would be foolish expectations to think someone is completely satisfied because one would lie this fact out for all to see and make fun of that person as if they stood up funny because everyone wants to get a laugh but no one wants to be laughed at this in part of life and it's hypocritcal visuals rituals of insecurity I am not sure what I want said about yesterdays hate tomorrow love right now because now is me and yesterday i learned what today was for and know more about what it takes to be happy and it takes a whole lot of things that people forget to remember to be thankful for furnishing each joy happy people love living a life to enjoy feeling new a new coat fresh breathe combed hair clean clothes and a little squirt of come get me in preperation for a big night where drinks toast laughs cross and kissing tongues feel best less slutty on an intimate level all mountains become hills crushed to rubble One man says, "Jill, your not going anywhere." Jill, "Oh dear Jack, your too kind, I was beginning to fall for you." |
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Very nice and interesting write.
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People love enjoy life Living happy Not to their fullest because their fullest would be foolish expectations to think someone is completely satisfied because one would lie this fact out for all to see and make fun of that person as if they stood up funny because everyone wants to get a laugh but no one wants to be laughed at this in part of life and it's hypocritcal visuals rituals of insecurity I am not sure what I want said about yesterdays hate tomorrow love right now because now is me and yesterday i learned what today was for and know more about what it takes to be happy and it takes a whole lot of things that people forget to remember to be thankful for furnishing each joy happy people love living a life to enjoy feeling new a new coat fresh breathe combed hair clean clothes and a little squirt of come get me in preperation for a big night where drinks toast laughs cross and kissing tongues feel best less slutty on an intimate level all mountains become hills crushed to rubble One man says, "Jill, your not going anywhere." Jill, "Oh dear Jack, your too kind, I was beginning to fall for you." You are simply Brilliant such a beautiful Soul are you |
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Nice job,,,I wish they had a dang Thumbs up little guy,,,lol I feel like folks might think I drink all the time with the one I keep using,,,lol |
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I loved it! Great write!
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cool breeze
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Edited by
d4tc
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Sun 02/08/09 11:55 AM
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Nice job,,,I wish they had a dang Thumbs up little guy,,,lol I feel like folks might think I drink all the time with the one I keep using,,,lol Your wish is there command! lol! I found it. I know what your saying about the drinking guy. I feel the same way. jimz, tanya, La Mom, faded Thank You for all the replies. and iam4u LOL |
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Depends on which "Jack" she's falling for:
Liquid Genie Genies, they say, Live in bottles. I become one As I shoot into The depths of emotional numbness. Granting my wishes to say all I desire Without care to your response Be it laughter or ire. Cowardly, you say? Yup, I agree. Perhaps there is a way to numb one’s give a **** Without the speed or paybacks required of my amber friend, Jack. Then again, Jack on his own does not exert such a hefty toll. But oh heaven help me, when I stop paying attention And let those sweet shots roll. Jack is apparently a bit territorial When it comes to sharing that numbing attraction. I must truly be a one man wench Even when numbing my excessive reaction. Thump of perception While muddling through this rant. I’m a two-man wench Without any flack. One would be Marc, The other, liquid Genie inducer, named Gentleman Jack. |
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Depends on which "Jack" she's falling for: Liquid Genie Genies, they say, Live in bottles. I become one As I shoot into The depths of emotional numbness. Granting my wishes to say all I desire Without care to your response Be it laughter or ire. Cowardly, you say? Yup, I agree. Perhaps there is a way to numb one’s give a **** Without the speed or paybacks required of my amber friend, Jack. Then again, Jack on his own does not exert such a hefty toll. But oh heaven help me, when I stop paying attention And let those sweet shots roll. Jack is apparently a bit territorial When it comes to sharing that numbing attraction. I must truly be a one man wench Even when numbing my excessive reaction. Thump of perception While muddling through this rant. I’m a two-man wench Without any flack. One would be Marc, The other, liquid Genie inducer, named Gentleman Jack. Now that was AWESOME! |
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