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Topic: Poor Creature
DeathsTreaty Joined Wed 01/09/08 Posts: 14622	Tue 02/03/09 07:43 PM
The colors of life still do not show? Does it let you bleed? Find it quickly Before it has a chance to catch up Do not stare with such a stone face You have till noon So go now Quickly Look at it run Like a beast without it's head That name you burden What nonsense is there to belive Poor Creature Poor Beast Poor bastard Poor fate of that man

mrsjonesitis Joined Mon 02/02/09 Posts: 13	Tue 02/03/09 07:52 PM
I like this

pkd1220 Joined Thu 05/24/07 Posts: 8318	Tue 02/03/09 07:53 PM
very nice, I like

DeathsTreaty Joined Wed 01/09/08 Posts: 14622	Tue 02/03/09 08:02 PM
Thanx ^^ (I kind of like this one too, its a bit different then my usual Writes)

d4tc Joined Tue 04/15/08 Posts: 2754	Tue 02/03/09 08:03 PM
Nice one DT

DeathsTreaty Joined Wed 01/09/08 Posts: 14622	Tue 02/03/09 08:15 PM
Thanx for Reading ^^

Unknow Joined Sat 03/15/08 Posts: 1972	Wed 02/04/09 03:58 AM

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