Topic: Frontin Ringless
d4tc's photo
Tue 02/03/09 10:56 AM
Give me head
a lick down

Touchdown

Married ?

Sorry !
flagrant foul

Give it now
to your other
half

make them laugh
take them back
to when
you were there
for them

show him
you know him
like you used too

No more boo-hoo's

See the good

Forgive
don't forget ;
you can't
dance alone

Happy all the time
who are you fooling ?

40 / Love

What you are
and want supplied

dividing the orgy

Tasting 40
at 40

Round that finger
cuffed : curbed

Does he love you
back , hun ?

or does he
always front
in the sack when ?

He thinks he owns
you

You let him
with exceptions

the input
lacking connection

illusions
dilluting
pollutingly foul

Drag the dead
horse
caved in
by divorce

he smelled
the defeat on
the shoots
of the sheet

of new loves
cigarettes gin
and the good
and bad smells
of other men

and if that wasn't
obvious
she started sleeping
with a grin

Peacefully searching
eyes closed
licking the
drool from her chin
to her upper cheek
to lips
actually she
swallowed

The other dreams
dreams only
shallow and hallow

no photo
Tue 02/03/09 04:04 PM
Flag down, penalty given. New game plan in order.bigsmile

LAMom's photo
Tue 02/03/09 07:03 PM
Edited by LAMom on Tue 02/03/09 07:17 PM
flowers


Oh ((( J ))) this left me with such an empty feeling, and all I can do is extend my arms,,, Hugs to you :heart:

I had to come back and read it for a third time,,, just to grasp the hurt
amoungst other feelings



no photo
Tue 02/03/09 07:49 PM
Whoah...Words can say so much...

lurchs_sister's photo
Wed 02/04/09 10:14 AM
Painfully honest (((J))):heart:

pkh's photo
Wed 02/04/09 01:49 PM
flowerforyou :heart:

no photo
Wed 02/04/09 04:25 PM

Give me head
a lick down

Touchdown

Married ?

Sorry !
flagrant foul

Give it now
to your other
half

make them laugh
take them back
to when
you were there
for them

show him
you know him
like you used too

No more boo-hoo's

See the good

Forgive
don't forget ;
you can't
dance alone

Happy all the time
who are you fooling ?

40 / Love

What you are
and want supplied

dividing the orgy

Tasting 40
at 40

Round that finger
cuffed : curbed

Does he love you
back , hun ?

or does he
always front
in the sack when ?

He thinks he owns
you

You let him
with exceptions

the input
lacking connection

illusions
dilluting
pollutingly foul

Drag the dead
horse
caved in
by divorce

he smelled
the defeat on
the shoots
of the sheet

of new loves
cigarettes gin
and the good
and bad smells
of other men

and if that wasn't
obvious
she started sleeping
with a grin

Peacefully searching
eyes closed
licking the
drool from her chin
to her upper cheek
to lips
actually she
swallowed

The other dreams
dreams only
shallow and hallow


Correct me if Im wrong but isn't this an argument for oral sex?

psssst d4....they dont call it a "job" for nothin'....just sayin.....

d4tc's photo
Wed 02/04/09 05:21 PM


Give me head
a lick down

Touchdown

Married ?

Sorry !
flagrant foul

Give it now
to your other
half

make them laugh
take them back
to when
you were there
for them

show him
you know him
like you used too

No more boo-hoo's

See the good

Forgive
don't forget ;
you can't
dance alone

Happy all the time
who are you fooling ?

40 / Love

What you are
and want supplied

dividing the orgy

Tasting 40
at 40

Round that finger
cuffed : curbed

Does he love you
back , hun ?

or does he
always front
in the sack when ?

He thinks he owns
you

You let him
with exceptions

the input
lacking connection

illusions
dilluting
pollutingly foul

Drag the dead
horse
caved in
by divorce

he smelled
the defeat on
the shoots
of the sheet

of new loves
cigarettes gin
and the good
and bad smells
of other men

and if that wasn't
obvious
she started sleeping
with a grin

Peacefully searching
eyes closed
licking the
drool from her chin
to her upper cheek
to lips
actually she
swallowed

The other dreams
dreams only
shallow and hallow


Correct me if Im wrong but isn't this an argument for oral sex?

psssst d4....they dont call it a "job" for nothin'....just sayin.....


An arguement for oral sex? I had mixed thoughts go into this and I never thought to pin point it. I was going for a 'lack of good oral sex need to take care of eachother and sometimes
all it takes is that one person in the relationship to make it work, outlook'


no photo
Wed 02/04/09 06:49 PM



Give me head
a lick down

Touchdown

Married ?

Sorry !
flagrant foul

Give it now
to your other
half

make them laugh
take them back
to when
you were there
for them

show him
you know him
like you used too

No more boo-hoo's

See the good

Forgive
don't forget ;
you can't
dance alone

Happy all the time
who are you fooling ?

40 / Love

What you are
and want supplied

dividing the orgy

Tasting 40
at 40

Round that finger
cuffed : curbed

Does he love you
back , hun ?

or does he
always front
in the sack when ?

He thinks he owns
you

You let him
with exceptions

the input
lacking connection

illusions
dilluting
pollutingly foul

Drag the dead
horse
caved in
by divorce

he smelled
the defeat on
the shoots
of the sheet

of new loves
cigarettes gin
and the good
and bad smells
of other men

and if that wasn't
obvious
she started sleeping
with a grin

Peacefully searching
eyes closed
licking the
drool from her chin
to her upper cheek
to lips
actually she
swallowed

The other dreams
dreams only
shallow and hallow


Correct me if Im wrong but isn't this an argument for oral sex?

psssst d4....they dont call it a "job" for nothin'....just sayin.....


An arguement for oral sex? I had mixed thoughts go into this and I never thought to pin point it. I was going for a 'lack of good oral sex need to take care of eachother and sometimes
all it takes is that one person in the relationship to make it work, outlook'




:heart:

RWMountain's photo
Wed 02/04/09 10:53 PM
A poem about oral sex is indeed creative.

I find it angry and self serving in retribution however.

It is still an interesting and powerfull writing.