Topic: unreal
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Tue 01/20/09 05:35 PM
you were beautiful last night
smiling at me blue eyes bright
i could'nt help but wonder why
you kissed me and it made me cry
you said you loved me
and i believed
those potent words
that make me bleed
it's all so real, so it seems
how you make me feel
in these briliant dreams

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Tue 01/20/09 05:37 PM
I liked it, too, but my eyes are brown, darn it!!! laugh

Very nice writing!! drinker

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Tue 01/20/09 05:39 PM
thank you

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Tue 01/20/09 08:33 PM
very nice,welcome