and what put that idea in your head

cuz we've been doing it since this morning, and I think hes just about out of ammo

im all for giving people ****
but my manhood has nothing to do with it
my brain is good enough

I wasnt implying yours, I was implying some egotistical prick who is b!tching about not getting girls, and then we'll have at 'em.

oh ok
well i guess this might be better than i thought
but where

I dont know, have you seen any lately? your supposed to be starting the party and I was gonna bring the heat

ill find something

look in relationship advice for what should i do
i think youll have fun with that one

well im still gonna keep this going so
ummmm.....ya

Not bad.

It's pretty deep.

thanks man its what i do

excellent

i just want the whole site to read it
so ill just keep this thread going forever

ill never let it die

let the good times roll

i wonder when someone will come here

this really shows you how bored i am

I would just say the train of our thoughts can sometimes be more like Sally The Camel, in that you move forward with a sentence and your imagery and then you find yourself chasing your tail, trying to connect with the beginning of your train. You have got the right idea, because you can either turn it around so that it does re-connect with the beginning or body of your sentence or entire poem; or, you can completely let it leave the sentence, leave the poem. I think that you can try to find more color, texture, flavor, senses and less proclamation. Its just my opinion, and it will come with more and more reading of poetry, and fiction.

i must keep it going

i really have to wonder how many people just read it or how many people look and run. well i guess it doesnt really matter