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i'm interested in your feedback...
i'm taking the quick / honest route |
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I'm not sure I get it, what does that mean???
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looks good to me man kept it short and sweet
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Your profile looks good to me...P for pass.
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criticism anyone?
suggestions? |
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your profile is great. simple and sweet.
if anything i'd recommend you describe what your "perfect" match would be. this is, after all, a dating site... even if you aren't looking for love. other than that it's great |
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^ dankeshon i'll do exactly that!
keep the feedback coming folks |
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Remove the word "repeated" from third sentence.
Remove the phrase "as recommended" from last paragraph. Add one photo of you smiling and showing your pearly whites. I would suggest removing the few sentences about you lining up dates. If you are here for friends, leave it at that. I know your intention isn't to sound cocky, but someone who "lines up dates" sounds like a player. Best set of photos I've seen that gives a nice view of who you are. Kudos! My two cents. |
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^ excellent input!
thanks much!! |
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