Topic: lets have it!
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Sun 01/18/09 11:45 AM
i'm interested in your feedback...

i'm taking the quick / honest route

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Sun 01/18/09 11:52 AM
I'm not sure I get it, what does that mean???

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Sun 01/18/09 11:52 AM
looks good to me man kept it short and sweet

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Sun 01/18/09 11:57 AM
Your profile looks good to me...P for pass.

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Sun 01/18/09 11:57 AM
:thumbsup: :thumbsup: tongue2

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Sun 01/18/09 12:37 PM
criticism anyone?

suggestions?

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Sun 01/18/09 12:56 PM
your profile is great. simple and sweet.

if anything i'd recommend you describe what your "perfect" match would be.

this is, after all, a dating site... even if you aren't looking for love.

other than that it's great :thumbsup:

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Sun 01/18/09 12:58 PM
^ dankeshon i'll do exactly that!

keep the feedback coming folks

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Sun 01/18/09 02:15 PM
Remove the word "repeated" from third sentence.

Remove the phrase "as recommended" from last paragraph.

Add one photo of you smiling and showing your pearly whites.

I would suggest removing the few sentences about you lining up dates. If you are here for friends, leave it at that. I know your intention isn't to sound cocky, but someone who "lines up dates" sounds like a player.

Best set of photos I've seen that gives a nice view of who you are. Kudos!


My two cents.

shades

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Sun 01/18/09 03:56 PM
^ excellent input!

thanks much!! happy