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Edited by
Seakolony
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Tue 01/06/09 09:28 AM
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Dream lover invades my slumber
Unawakening in dreadful hunger Quiet tones in the distance Beckoning forth Unable to alter this inevitable course Feeling the sensation breath upon my nape This kiss upon my temple Releases an uncontrollable ache Sounds of the alarm startling me awake Remaining still the unsatisfied quake Memories retreat into the subconscious 'Til slumber again envelopes me in a deep abyss |
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Edited by
Haloheldbyhorns
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Tue 01/06/09 09:03 AM
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 Very nice concise vision
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Very nice concise vision Thanks |
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Nicely done
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Nicely done Thank you 
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thanks for reading
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Very very nice.
A dream to come true.
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Very very nice. A dream to come true. thank you for the nice comments WW |
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I happen to know the author and she never ceases to amaze me with her artistic talent.Wish I had some
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I happen to know the author and she never ceases to amaze me with her artistic talent.Wish I had some Thanks Doug ur sweet |
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((((A)))) 
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very nice
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((((A)))) thanks bill |
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very nice thank you so much PDK |
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