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You don’t know me
The things I need The things that would Please Appease Excite and Delight me You never took the time To see what you would find It you only looked deeper Tried A little harder Looked A little farther To you It never mattered If my smile was real Or perhaps concealed The things I feel You didn’t want To see The real me But I looked deeper And now I’m free Of dreams and hopes Once holding me In your cold Uncaring Captivity When I look in your eyes I realize they’re nothing more Than impersonal copies Of what you’d Find on a mural Behind the Prescriptives counter And to think I used to fall So deeply Into them … Deep enough to Lose Myself Mindlessly Stumbling Fumbling Searching to find Something more Than Me To find a “We” That never Truly Existed Well I’ve been Enlightened My vision Heightened The darkness Lightened You’ve shown me Who you are And what You will Never be And now at last My path is wide And clear of Fantastical Notions Convoluted Emotions Emptied of The insincere Debris Under which You buried me The accumulation Of promises Promised Piled high On the tray Of hope Carried around By the Falsehearted You that I believed and Trusted Weighing Heavy On me with the Disenchantment Of a thousand Dreams Never to be Realized “I was once lost But now I’m found Was blind But now I see” Amazing grace Amazing waste Bitter taste Of loves embrace |
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i really enjoyed working with you on this 
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(A) i really enjoyed working with you on this As well as I enjoyed working with you sweet man
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Two Hearts Two Souls
And two amazing spirits I love so Dearly Bravo |
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Two Hearts Two Souls And two amazing spirits I love so Dearly Bravo Hello Darling girl~you've been on my mind~how lovely to see your beautiful face on here~
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Two Hearts Two Souls And two amazing spirits I love so Dearly Bravo you always seem to know what to say...don't you? miss you... |
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I feel like you wrote this right out of my heart to my ex... very well written... and emotional..
Thank you... |
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Well done you two. I liked this one. Has a sad ring to it but still good.
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I feel like you wrote this right out of my heart to my ex... very well written... and emotional.. Thank you... thank you for taking the time to respond 
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I feel like you wrote this right out of my heart to my ex... very well written... and emotional.. Thank you...
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Well done you two. I liked this one. Has a sad ring to it but still good. Oh my friend, as you well know, most things from the heart can be very sad~ |
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Well done you two. I liked this one. Has a sad ring to it but still good. Oh my friend, as you well know, most things from the heart can be very sad~ |
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  VERY Nice.. Great team and great write. |
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Well done you two. I liked this one. Has a sad ring to it but still good. sad can have a point too...as you know. emotional bloodletting for the greater good is therapy at its purest form thank you...
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VERY Nice.. Great team and great write. thank you iam she deserves all the credit here... |
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You don’t know me The things I need The things that would Please Appease Excite and Delight me You never took the time To see what you would find It you only looked deeper Tried A little harder Looked A little farther To you It never mattered If my smile was real Or perhaps concealed The things I feel You didn’t want To see The real me But I looked deeper And now I’m free Of dreams and hopes Once holding me In your cold Uncaring Captivity When I look in your eyes I realize they’re nothing more Than impersonal copies Of what you’d Find on a mural Behind the Prescriptives counter And to think I used to fall So deeply Into them … Deep enough to Lose Myself Mindlessly Stumbling Fumbling Searching to find Something more Than Me To find a “We” That never Truly Existed Well I’ve been Enlightened My vision Heightened The darkness Lightened You’ve shown me Who you are And what You will Never be And now at last My path is wide And clear of Fantastical Notions Convoluted Emotions Emptied of The insincere Debris Under which You buried me The accumulation Of promises Promised Piled high On the tray Of hope Carried around By the Falsehearted You that I believed and Trusted Weighing Heavy On me with the Disenchantment Of a thousand Dreams Never to be Realized “I was once lost But now I’m found Was blind But now I see” Amazing grace Amazing waste Bitter taste Of loves embrace I really love this poem...it hits home! Very good write!
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Behind the emptiness
of an ill-fated match, I sift even deeper to find that catch. That "22" that must exist The part that hides what should be bliss. Once upon a time, there was "something" that drew us both in - "Show Me" the Neeeeed deeply rooted neath skin. Show me the pith of the orange neath rind. Show me the seeds of the grape on the vine. Ahhhh, like the orange and grape, one must deeply indulge to find the heart past the outer fruit bulge. Lovely and well done Kace and Ms. Wiz! |
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an amazing write comes from two exceptional minds joining forces- very nice
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Behind the emptiness of an ill-fated match, I sift even deeper to find that catch. That "22" that must exist The part that hides what should be bliss. Once upon a time, there was "something" that drew us both in - "Show Me" the Neeeeed deeply rooted neath skin. Show me the pith of the orange neath rind. Show me the seeds of the grape on the vine. Ahhhh, like the orange and grape, one must deeply indulge to find the heart past the outer fruit bulge. Lovely and well done Kace and Ms. Wiz! Thank you Wench~and thank you for posting this piece~it's wonderful~
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an amazing write comes from two exceptional minds joining forces- very nice Thank you my sunshine girl~
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